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Dear Annie,

Hope you are doing fine. My departure date for New Zealand is drawing near, and I am busy with last-minute preparations. As you know, I have enrolled at an institute called 'Practical English' in Wellington, for a six-month Advanced course, full-time. It is quite expensive but I am hopeful of improving my English skills, especially pronunciation.

To assist in covering the costs of my study, I aim to find a part-time job. Not only are the college fees rather high, but also I know that rental accommodation in the capital city will not be cheap; to say nothing of food and heating expenses! So I would very much like to arrange some temporary employment before I arrive.

I was wondering if you could ask around among your friends and colleagues to see if anyone wants a house-cleaner, gardener, or nanny for their children. I know you have a wide social network in Wellington which you could canvas for me if you wouldn't mind, I'd be so grateful.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes,

Juliana

Direction: As if you are Annie, read the letter and give a suitable response.

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Dear Juliana,

I am very happy to be the person you can express your concerns. Thank you for trusting and sharing your life with me. Besides, thank you for giving me an opportunity to help you. Certainly, I will contact with my friends in order that I could help you in finding a part time job.

In fact, I know you have little difficulty related to finance. At now, I have a friend who owns a famous hotel in Wellington where you are planning to take a pronunciation course for 6 months. Her name is Jennifer. Her phone number is 714.636.3002 or jennifer_portobello hotel@gmail.com. She needs a gardener. The time is very flexible and you can choose the appropriate one for you. Specially, you don’t worry about accommodation. You can stay at your working place. It is very convenient for you to work and take a break.

It's wonderful to hear that you are going to enroll an English pronunciation course in Wellington. As you know, learning the correct pronunciation of English can be the most difficult part of learning English. Moreover, standard pronunciation is no less important than vocabularies and grammars. You have chosen a good place to study, where there are many good teachers and they are willing to help you overcome the barriers of pronunciation. I believe that your pronunciation skills will significantly improve after finishing this course.

I wish you all the best for your study. Wishing you success with your dreams and ambitions. Let’s keep in touch. I am eager to meet you at New Zealand city.

Yours,
Annie
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Dear Juliana

Hope you are doing fine. My departure date for New Zealand is drawing near, and I am busy with last-minute preparations. As you know, I have enrolled at an institute called 'Practical English' in Wellington, for a six-month Advanced course, full-time. It is quite expensive but I am hopeful of improving my English skills, especially pronunciation.

To assist in covering the costs of my study, I aim to find a part-time job. Not only are the college fees rather high, but also I know that rental accommodation in the capital city will not be cheap; to say nothing of food and heating expenses! So I would very much like to arrange some temporary employment before I arrive.

I was wondering if you could ask around among your friends and colleagues to see if anyone wants a house-cleaner, gardener, or nanny for their children. I know you have a wide social network in Wellington which you could canvas for me if you wouldn't mind, I'd be so grateful.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes,

Annie
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Dear Marcus,

Hope you and family are doing great. I have got admitted to the Queen Mary University of London for my MSc in Accounting and Finance. This is a full-time course and hopefully, I will fly to London next month. To support my tuition fee and get some work experience, I am planning to get a part-time job and I am hoping that you can help me find a suitable one.

My class will begin on 2nd November and I will arrive in the UK on 24th October. I want to pursue a career in the financial service industry in my home country and want to take advantages of the contemporary and specialised approach to accountancy and finance that this course offers. The worlds of accountancy and finance are always changing due to the changing legal framework the financial sector operates in. This is why I have decided to enrol in this course. I plan to finish it on time and learn as much as possible.

To assist in covering my tuition fee and get some job experience, I intend to do a part-time job, specifically in an accounting firm. Hope my Bsc in Accounting would be helpful for that. I hardly know anyone in the UK except you and I know that you have a wide social network in London that you can use to manage a job for me. I have forwarded my Curriculum Vitae to your email and I am expecting that you can manage a part-time job before I arrive at London. I would be indebted for your support.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Take care and stay fine.

Best wishes,

Stacy

Gửi lúc: 20:40:49 ngày 07-01-2020
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Dear Juliana,

Please prepare for your trip. Wish you have a peaceful trip.

I have noticed on my facebook to find a part-time job. I think will early get reply from my list freinds. It is not to hard to find a part-time job in Wellington. I will choose a suitable job with your list time.

Best wishes,

Annie
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Dear Juliana,

I am very surprised when I got the email from you, it's a long time I have not seen you since I went to New Zealand. I am very happy to welcome you to New Zealand where is a nice place on the world, you can find anything in supermarket for your life and no need to confusedness.

As you know, nowadays English is very important which will help you so much in the future. I also confirm that the cost in New Zealand is so expensive so that it's a problem with you and please do not feel sad, I will help you to solve the problem.

Next to my house, the neighborhood who is a nice person, he need a nanny for his children in 1 year, they promise that they will give a free accommodation for the nanny. I will introduce you to my neighborhood as soon as I receive your CV.

I can not wait to see you in New Zealand.

Cheer,

Annie
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