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Dear Mr Cameron,

I am a first-year student at your college and my major is arts. I am writing to seek your permission to change one of my courses. I am hoping that you would allow me to do so.

My student identification number is 254102. During my admission back in January, I took the music course and it has been a month since then. So far I am not happy with my progress and I am confident that I would do better if I take the history curriculum, which I have always felt passionate about. I would not say that I feel negative about my music classes, but I believe I should go with the course I feel more attached to.

When I got admitted to the college, no seat in the history department was available and the music was my second preference. Recently, I talked to the dean of the history department and he notified that with your permission, I would be able to intake the history subject.

I would request you to permit me to intake history course and drop the music class. I would be always grateful to you for granting me to switch my course.
Yours sincerely,

Caterina Holmes

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Dear Ms. Caterina Holmes,

I am very glad to receive your letter and know that you are a student freshman of our college. Besides, thank you for telling us about your interest in the history subject that you love.

In fact, I would like to tell you that our college is always ready to create good conditions for all students to study the subjects that they like. Therefore, you do not need to worry so much about that.

As for your situation, I permit you to change from the music course to the history class. Therefore, you can come to our college on 10th September to submit the application form for changing the course as the history class begins on 5th October. Besides, I would like to tell you that you have to sign a form which we will give you later and then, you can start to study the history class. Thus, you also need to obey the rules in this class because I cannot give you any more chances.

Finally, I hope that you will make the best decision and have a lot of great achievements and become a good student. If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to contact with me. I am available at the moment and will reply you as soon as possible.

Your sincerely,
Mr. Cameron
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Dear Caterina Holmes,

First of all, I would like to extend my thanks to you for expressing your desire which is to change one of your courses. Besides, I am also very sorry to hear that when you got admitted to the college, no seat in the history department was available and the music was your second preference. It was such a pity, and I totally sympathize with the inconvenience you dealt with during the past time.

After reading your letter, I took it into consideration and came to a decision to allow you to change your course as you requested. All you have to do is to send me a formal form explaining the reasons of this change and a cheque of 100 $ for enrolment fee and text books. Then, you will be accepted into the history department.

I do hope that my solution will do you the world of good and you will get good achievements in the near future.

Sincerely yours,
Mr. Cameron,

The life is not fair. But the only way is to accept it.
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If you trust your decide , i will aloud your music course into a history course .
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Dear Caterina Holmes,
Yesterday I received your letter asking my permission for your course changing. The fact that, music is a interesting subject, a strong point of our school. And as you know, the course changing when you are taking part a subject is not allowed in principle.
However, there are some exceptional circumstances. On my point of view, I always want to give utility to students to learn best. According to what you expressed, I found that you have a passion about history subject, and your confidence doing well at this subject. I believe that if you have always felt passionate about history, you will do better with it. And I hope you will keep your words. I accept your request to intake history course and drop the music class.
Please come to see me at my office at 11:00am tomorrow to receive the permit letter. Wish you will successful with your choice.
Best regard,
Gửi lúc: 21:01:25 ngày 10-09-2019
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Dear Ms. Caterina Holmes,

I am writing this letter to reply you about your changing course from the Music course to the History class. I really understand your situation now. It must be difficult for you to study the music subject without passion, which will make you feel so bored when you cannot understand what the teacher Music teaches to you. Therefore, I comprehend your request and I allow you to transfer from the Music courses to the History class.

In fact, in this our college, I always create good conditions for our students, and I pride in providing the best study environment to bring satisfaction to all students. Besides, I can virtually guarantee that you will have exciting studying hours and enhance knowledge you need. Therefore, I would like to invite you to meet me at 9 a.m on September 14th, 2019 in my office to fill out the form for your change. After that, I will send my acceptation to the history department and you should go there to make your changes as soon as possible. Further to that, I would like to inform you that there is difference in the tuition fee between the History class and Music course. Thus, you have to pay a small fee associated with changing your courses as this is the rule of our college.

That is what I can do for you as the college rector. I hope you will be pleased with it. Please don’t hesitate to contact to me if you have any questions.

Best regards,
Mr Cameron
The college rector
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