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Dear Eric,

Hope you are doing great. It's been only two weeks since I last saw you and it already feels like a year! I am writing to offer you a concert ticket that I purchased a few days ago. As I can't make it to the concert, I thought you should go.

On November 7th, Guns N' Roses is coming to Oakland to rock the city. The full team would be on the stage and it would be a 4 hours' blast at the Oakland Coliseum. I did not want to miss my favourite band's live performance and purchased a ticket. Unfortunately, I will have to cancel it due to a sudden family tour to Canada during the time to meet my grandparents on their 50th wedding anniversary.

I know how much you revere Guns N' Roses and that's why I would like you to enjoy the concert. I did not want to disappoint my parents and dishearten my grandmother, who is eagerly expecting me on their marriage anniversary.

If you want the ticket, just let me know. I will give the ticket to David, who is also going to the concert, and you can meet him prior to the concert to collect it. Do not forget to record the performance and share your experience with me when I get back and meet you.

Take care and have fun.



Warm regards,
Robert

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Dear Robert,

I am really happy to have received your email and greatly appreciate your care. You are one of my best friends.
Actually, I feel quite sad when you could not watch the show of Guns N' Roses with me. I think you also expect this performance for a long time and even intend to take a photo with this band. However, I think that the events of the family are the highest priority and you should not an absence. 50th wedding anniversary of your grandparents would be a big party, you have a chance to meet many your relatives who you have not seen for a long period of time. Have a nice party.

For me, I certainly will watch that concert. I bought nice shoes and beautiful clothes in PG's store last week and will purchase the best camera with Canon brand and record the whole performance, then I share it with people on Facebook.

See you soon,
Eric
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Dear Robert,

I am very happy to receive your letter after such a long time! I am fine. How about you and your family? I hope everything is good.

In reality, I love Guns N' Roses band. As far as I know, Guns N' Roses band is one of the biggest rock band in the world, and they have toured throughout the world. All members of the band are beloved, admired and respected by all their fans worldwide. Therefore, I really want to see my favorite band which will perform on this November 7th. Also,I want to know more about them in real life, too.

However, it's really a pity that I can't come to there because my father is sick, I have to stay at home. Do you remember my father? You met him at my birthday party last year. He was strong at that time but now my health father is very bad. At present, my family takes turns going the hospital to take care of my father every day and everyone in family is worried about my father's health. Therefore, I can’t go anywhere. Hope you understand.

Finally, I hope you'll have a wonderful time with your family and your grandparents, and let's send my best regards to all members of your family. I hope that I will have the opportunity to see the concert with you on another occasion.

Best wishes,
Eric

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Dear Robert,

I received your letter this morning. Thanks for your warmly care. I really excited with the concert which is going to be taken in OakLand. More surprise that it is my favorite music band, The Guns N' Roses. Sadly, the ticket has sold out, I have thought that I will not have the chance to go to that music show until I read your letter and of course, there is no reason to stop me from accepting your deal .
When you come to your grandparents' house at Canada, remember to send for them a regard from me. It have been 3 years since the last time I met your grandparents and they still look very beautiful.
About the ticket, please tell David to contact me at this new mobile phone number : 098-546. I will record fully 4 hours show for you when you come back. Surely you gonna like it.

Best regards
Erik <3

Gửi lúc: 21:09:28 ngày 23-04-2019
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Dear Robert,

It's such a long time since we last met to each other. But that's not the problem, each of us has our own reasons. However, I was really surprised to receive your letter yesterday. And I was even more surprised to know that you will offer me a ticket to live show of the concert on November 7th.

Actually, I can't use any word to show my excitement at this time. l jumped up for joy when l heard your news. It's great, I hope time passes quickly until November 7th to meet Guns N'Roses band.

As you know, Guns N' Roses band is very popular all over the world because of their performance style. They have millions of fans around the world mostly teenagers. They always have an enthusiastic performance style whenever they stand on the stage.

In reality, l have been a big fan of Guns N' Roses band, their songs are so good that I can listen to them several times. Also, their voice is very emotional and easily touches my soul. Thus, there is nothing more exciting than to hear that my favorite band will perform at the Oakland Coliseum. Therefore, I'm very excited and there is no reason that I refuse to see the concert with David.

However, in the previous letter, you said if I wanted a ticket to see the concert, I would meet David to get the ticket. In fact, David and I both we have never met, could you tell me how to recognize him? (for example, how tall is he?, what color is his hair? what color does he wear when he goes to the concert?and so on). In addition, inform me the exactly what time the concert starts so that I can arrange my schedule to see the concert with David.

Robert, don't worry about what you told me in the letter. I promise you that I will record the Guns N' Roses band performance for you when you can't go there. Also, I will share with you some interesting information about the concert when we have the opportunity to meet.

Again, thank you for offering me a precious ticket to live show of Guns N'Roses. May you always be blessed with good health. Please give my best regards to your family and your grandparents, and drop me a line if possible. I expect to see you again one day.

Yours,
Eric
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Dear Robert,
I am very happy to receive your email. I miss you too and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. And it is so kind of you to give me your concert ticket. I really appreciate that.
We are both big fans of Guns N’ Roses.This is the first time they are going to our city. I know you love their music so much and cannot wait to see this performance at the Oakland Coliseum. Hence, I am so regret that you cannot go to their concert due to a sudden family tour to Canada.
It is true that I really want to see this concert. You know me so well. When I heard about the concert, I was really excited about that and I tried so hard to buy a ticket to the performance. But I cannot buy any tickets, they are all sold out very quickly. I am so sad about that. So it is very fortune for me when you offer me your ticket. I cannot wait to go to the concert.
Besides, you told me that I could meet David prior to the concert to collect the ticket you will give. Because I lost my phone last month, I do not have his number now. Would you mind giving me his phone number to contact him before the concert?
I promise I will record the performance using my friend’s new camera for you and share you all my experience about it when you get back. Hope you will have a fun trip and please give my best wishes to your grandparents for me.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Eric.



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