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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the local shopping area where I frequently go shopping. They offer some really nice amenities but there are still scopes for improvements. I am hoping you would publish it in your newspaper so that the market authority learn about it and take initiatives to develop the area.

To start with, the Agora Community Shopping Complex is the largest shopping market in our town where several thousand people shop every day. The strictly monitored market price and the availability of the products under a single roof are two attractive aspects of this market. Moreover, I like the way the shops are arranged on each floor. Overall, I am happy with this market and visit it almost twice to thrice each month.

Regrettably, most of the shoppers still do not accept international credit cards. I have seen many tourists suffer due to this. Since this is a tourists area and many foreigners visit this market, the international credit cards should be accepted by all merchants. Besides, the food court area is really compact and cannot serve many customers at a time. One has to stand in a cue for a long even for a cup of tea! This area should be extended and more food businesses should be encouraged to open new shops for the convenience of shoppers.

I think your newspaper is widely read in our area and if you run a poll regarding the issues I mentioned, you will find a realistic picture of it. Please publish an editorial and help improve the local people's shopping experience.

Looking forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for giving the matter your attention.

Yours faithfully,
Mark Almond

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Dear Mr. Mark Almond,

I am writing to thank you sincerely for your information. Besides, I am happy that you are a reader of our newspaper, and I would like to thank you for your interest in our newspaper.

In fact, I would like to express my sympathy with the problems you are meeting. I really understand how you and tourists feel when the mall does not accept credit card payments.

As editor of the newspaper, our newspaper's operation is based on the readers' demands, so I will come there to check and collect more opinions for my article. Then, I will write an article as your suggestions. Besides, I will send your ideas to those in charge of the mall so that they can understand your desire and tourists and meet their expectations.

Once again, thank you for your ideas and the information you gave me. It would be our great pleasure. And I hope that you will be satisfied with your desire.

Kind regards,
Susan Lee
The editor of the newspaper
Gửi lúc: 23:57:59 ngày 26-03-2019
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khu mua sắm agora là khu mua sắm sạch sẽ thực phẩm an toàn không khí tốt trong lành
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Dear Mr.Mark Almond,

I am the editor of daily Time's newspaper. I am honored to receive your letter and thanks for your attention to my newspaper. I considered carefully the contents of your letter. I am sorry to say that I cannot write the article as your proposal.

In fact, I need to check the information that you provided it for me. Checking information will help me an objective views and more details about the mall's activities and policies. In other words, I will conduct a survey of tourists ' opinions and collect more valued data and listen to tourists' voices in order that I write article more accurately. Therefore, your opinions in your letter are not enough for me to write the article.

Once again, I am sincerely sorry because I have not enough base to write a article as your proposal. However, I will contact the competent authority to consider your ideas. I hope that you will keep being a dedicated citizen.

Yours sincerely,
Kathy Pham
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to reply to your letter. I really didn't know anything about the Agora Community Shopping Complex. Now I rewrite this letter to answer your very good question.

First of all, I think I will now try to overcome the Agora Community Shopping Complex. But I also hope everyone understands anything that has advantages and disadvantages.

The advantage is to avoid financial and high-tech frauds that keep pace with the upward development trend (Age 4.0), which helps the parking operations to be done quickly, ...

Besides, the disadvantages are that the people working in the Agora Community Shopping Complex have not yet had any training to be able to implement the POS system fluently. And then even if you know how to use it, it can still be: Trespassing to the security of ATM cards, cards that are scratched a little can not be paid will affect customers, ...

For these reasons, we cannot act arbitrarily, which may cause the Agora Community Shopping Complex to encounter many problems, besides being a lot of tourists visiting so we will have to In order for our enthusiasm to be here, the visitors will become more and more knowledgeable about a hospitable land, the city is beautiful.

So I will continue to think and find the best solution for all sides to solve these problems.

Thank you very much for helping me know such an important thing without any organization or organization dealing with it.

Best regards
Tran Kha Tam
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Dear Mark Almond,
Thanks for expressing your opinion about the local shopping area with us. Your opinion is truly valuable and help people concern about improving the local people’s shopping experience. We would like to publish it in our newspaper. Hence, there are some points I want to discuss with you.
I can see very clearly you pointed three attractive aspects of the Agora Community Shopping Complex. Firstly, the strictly monitored market price it helps products are cheaper and people feel confident when shopping at it. Secondly, the availability of the products under a single roof it helps shopping is more convenient and comfortable. Thirdly, the display of the shops is nice and attractive. I would like to add some other points make people are happy with this market and visit more often such as generous discounts on goods, the enthusiasm of the staff…
About the problem with international credit cards, I absolutely agree with you that it is inconvenient for tourists when their international credit cards aren’t accepted by most of the shoppers in this area. Moreover, shoppers can’t sell their products. Therefore, a lot of shops that often have tourists visit, should accept the international credit cards. Thus, they will sell more products and tourists are more satisfied. Especially, more and more tourists are visiting this area.
Besides, you mentioned that the food court area is really compact and customers have to stand in a cue for a long. It makes them waste their time and unsatisfied. Thus, you suggested that this area should be extended and more food businesses should be encouraged to open new shops. I can see your point but I think profit to the sellers is very important. Initially, they should hire more servers and customers will stand in two cues instead of one now.
Also, You suggested running a poll regarding the issues you mentioned to make it deeper to us. That’s a good idea and we appreciate it. If the first article of the local shopping area is well received, we will continue this matter.
Hope you will read the issue that will public on next Monday, contained your opinion about the local shopping area and enjoy it. if you have any question pleased feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
David
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