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Some people believe schoolchildren should help to create rules in their schools. Others say teachers alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, school rules is a very important thing which affects very much to the student's life. And now I'll give my own opinion about this problems.
Firstly, to be honest, if school children create the school's rules by themselves, they will obey the rules seriously. They will remember all the school's rules, do it and remind the others. They also can learn how to make decisions. It's an useful skill for them in studying, life and in the future.
Besides, the decisions of the teachers are really important, too. The teachers are mature enough to decide what the rules are. They have enough life skill and knowledge to know what is the best thing their students
Finally, in my opinion, I think we should let the children create rules by their own. And the teachers have to let them know the problems of the rules they have created and repair that. It helps children to obey the rules, get more knowledge and more independent.
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Of course school children could help to creat rules in their school, they can do that, but sometimes they cant withstand their instinct.
Few of them want to revolt with their way, Domination seem very difficult to them. So that is the reason why we need teachers in their school.
Beside teaching the studying to School children, the Teachers should teach the knowledge about culture, about behavier and teach them how to stay calm, how to be the good person.
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Nowadays, many hold the view that group learning is a better way to students’ study at school, while there is a body of opinion which claims that independent learning will benefit students more. In this essay I will examine both sides of the debate and give my opinion.

To begin with, it is undeniable that by studying together students can have better understanding of what they are learning. This is because other classmates will offer different perspectives about the knowledge instructed by teachers, which means that learners can absorb it in various ways when they choose group study. In addition, studying with others can help pupils learn efficiently, for this study mode can provide them with an environment where they are often required to collaborate in order to complete tasks. To be specific, students do not have to finish reading all the chapters of a book assigned by their professors and instead they should only carry out parts of them when they work with other peers.

On other hand, however, learning independently can help students acquire more knowledge. Compared with those who decide to learn in a group, they can start their learning immediately without waiting until others are ready, which can allow them to spare more time on their study and gain more. Furthermore, through leaning individually, pupils are able to concentrate on their study, as they may not be distracted by the discussion with others when there are problems occurring.

To summarize, there is no doubt that collective studying can enable students to have comprehensive knowledge and study efficiency. At the same time, however, studying alone can make it possible for students to obtain more knowledge. In the final analysis, therefore, I can only conclude that cooperative learning is superior to independent study.
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Nobody would dispute the fact that everyone should obey rules in society. While some people believe that only educators are allowed to participate in making rules in school, I hold the view that young students should be involved in as well. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give reasons for my opinion.

The reasons why young students should be involved in making rules are manifold. Firstly, it is true that children can learn from the decision-making process, and they can understand more about why rules are tremendously important. For example, children are more likely to follow the rules if their opinions are considered. Another key benefit is that these young students can learn how to make decisions, and this will help form their decision-making mind. Furthermore, it is obvious that children are in general more creative than adults, hence they can make the rules more interesting such as they can add more visuals.

However, there are benefits when solely teachers are allowed to make rules. Adults are more mature than children because they have more life experience and more knowledge. If only educators were making rules, the process would be more efficient. For instance, adults know what is the best for their students, so multiple perspectives will still be considered. Although teachers are less creative than kids, rules are not supposed to be like arts, and they are supposed to be strict and clear.

In conclusion, although some people would argue that only educators should make rules, I believe that there are more benefits when young students also involve in the process, such as their creativity can make the rules more interesting, they can learn from making decisions, and they will be more likely to follow the rules.
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There is a hot debate that rules at school should issue by only educators or students can give their ideas on that. In my perspective, teachers should let children take part in the building process of school rules.
On the one hand, there are many benefits in case teachers get fully powers to make rules. Educators who have comprehensive views of the whole learning process of students, so they understand what can help students become good citizens. For example, adults always know that on time is very important in life, however students usually are very lazy and unfollow schedules. Therefore, teachers issue many strictly time regulations request students obey it in order to train them about time management skill. In addition, administrators of schools have foresights on the influences of social changes on students, so through school regulations, teachers can equip for students some skills and ethical standards which can help them adapt with the changes of society.
On the second hand, educational works will get the best effectively if students can contribute their ideas in the building process of school rules. The conspicuous efficiency is that children can learn a lot of new knowledge by exchanging their opinions with other students and teachers. From that, they can understand more about why rules are extremely important, so they will comply with school regulations by their initiative. Furthermore, by this way, teachers and students are becoming closer, so teachers who can understand more about abilities of children as well as desire and family circumstance, can have proper methods in education. For instance, through collecting ideas from students, teachers can seize the change in psychology of students, from that educators can issue some rewards or punishments during learning process to stimulate students can get their best version.
In conclude, with above explanation, although children don’t have experience, however they are the people practice that rules, so I strongly support the idea that students should be involved in making rules to get the best effectively in education.
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