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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?

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Some people claim that young people should be encouraged to play perform classical music while others subscribe to shouldn't. I partly advocate in agreement with the former opinion for the following ground.
Firstly, learning classical music can nourish the soul of children, foster patriotism, and have the spirit of love for art. Children are learned classical music early can develop intelligence, logistics, and creative thinking. For instance, my younger brother is a boy has listened to music when he was a litter boy. Thus, I seem he is study better than me in most subjects. I think the cause of the issue is my brother was learned classic music. Secondly, learning classical music is a know addition to knowledge for everyone. On the other hand, some people shouldn't donate to this issue because it very difficult and now the rare person can enough level can teach other people.
In conclusion, I partly young people should be encouraged to play perform classical music. Given that young people should be encouraged to play perform classical music.
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Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?

It is becoming less and less common for students to both listen to and play classical musical. In my opinion, this is the result of changing tastes and it should be countered by concerned parents when possible.

The reason fewer young people today opt to listen to or take up playing classical music is that there are other, more modern options. In the past, classical music helped students gain entrance into elite universities and was a potential career path. This is still true but to a lesser extent as the diversification of musical styles and the growth of the music industry now allows students to develop skills with music more suited to their particular preferences. A young person today is more likely to want to learn the drums to play in a rock group or practice rapping. This applies for listening habits as well and is reflected in the dominance of pop music.

Regardless, it is still advisable for parents to instill a love of classical music and encourage playing an instrument. First of all, appreciating classical music requires greater mental engagement and patience than other popular genres. In an era of shorter attention spans and immediate gratification, a love of complex melodies can serve as a counter-balance. Secondly, the benefits of playing an instrument are self-evident. Decades of substantial research support the claims that it aids cognitive development generally and one’s creativity more specifically. This is apart from the discipline one must develop through years of intensive practice.

In conclusion, though it is natural younger people today opt for more popular genres, there is great value in sustaining an interest in classical music. It is therefore up to parents to gently encourage such a pursuit.
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all of us know everything also has their own beauty. every kind of music are different they are have their own attractive to everyone . example jazz is so relaxing and classic music is good . but in this century, this time why are they listen to the different? oh the main reason is not come from they hate it or that kind of music is outdated. you need to know that everyone have their own view when thinking something. they like any new kind of music ,that it is hot at the moment like rap or rock or jazz and....so some of them do not care about the different music . so the young people should not perform classical music or play it when they do not want to do.
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1. The reason fewer young people today opt to listen to or take up playing classical music is that there are other, more modern options. 2. In the past, classical music helped students gain entrance into elite universities and was a potential career path. 3. This is still true but to a lesser extent as the diversification of musical styles and the growth of the music industry now allows students to develop skills with music more suited to their particular preferences. 4. A young person today is more likely to want to learn the drums to play in a rock group or practice rapping. 5. This applies for listening habits as well and is reflected in the dominance of pop music.

Write a topic sentence with a clear main idea at the end.
Explain your main idea.
Develop it with specific detail as fully as possible.
Continue to develop it with an example or a hypothetical example.
Extend it to both parts of the question.
1. Regardless, it is still advisable for parents to instill a love of classical music and encourage playing an instrument. 2. First of all, appreciating classical music requires greater mental engagement and patience than other popular genres. 3. In an era of shorter attention spans and immediate gratification, a love of complex melodies can serve as a counter-balance. 4. Secondly, the benefits of playing an instrument are self-evident. 5. Decades of substantial research support the claims that it aids cognitive development generally and one’s creativity more specifically. 6. This is apart from the discipline one must develop through years of intensive practice.

Write a new topic sentence with a new main idea at the end.
Explain your new main idea.
Include specific details and examples.
Switch to a second main idea if you have one.
And develop the second idea fully.
Conclude the paragraph or finish developing your last idea.
1. In conclusion, though it is natural younger people today opt for more popular genres, there is great value in sustaining an interest in classical music. 2. It is therefore up to parents to gently encourage such a pursuit.

Summarise your main ideas.
Include a final thought. Read more about conclusions here.
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Nowadays, teenagers have less habits in listening to or playing classical music in some nations. There are various reasons for this trend. From my viewpoint, young generation should be encouraged to go to the concert to listen or perform this kind of music to preserve human cultural heritage.


There are several reasons lead to the ignoring of young people to classical tune. Firstly, music has changed and developed dramatically by the time; therefore, young individuals have many options to choose from as pop music, rock music or modern ones. Moreover, in modern life, young generation may be attracted by a wide range of different recreational activities such as game shows, films, etc. They may find classical melody boring, obsolete and old-fashioned ; hence, they ignore it. Thirdly, the requirement for being fluent in classical performance is a barrier for new comers because the musical instruments are costly and training courses are time-consuming.


Youth generation need to be inspired to play and keep it existence because of its benefits. Classical music is considered as a cultural heritage of human beings that we need to preserve. If we do not take action soon, it may disappear in the future. In addition, classical tune is not only a kind of music to help people to relax, it also has benefit in enhancing concentration ability of people with tough tasks. Therefore, parents can encourage their children to listen classical melody while studying. By this way, we could preserve this traditional music for our future generation.


In conclusion, it is true that there are fewer people who are interested in classical music these days. This trend happens due to several causes and from my view point, we should stimulate youth to enjoy, play and preserve it for our younger generations.


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