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The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance. Why do people do operations to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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I think they take actions to change their appearance for each person because they want to be beautiful in everyone's eyes or in other words to make others change their outlook. They want others to admit that they are prettier than themselves.
They change their faces to want them to become someone else, but they don't know that if they change faces, they will still remain who they are.
This affects not only them but also society. They make society develop negatively and also adversely affect everyone around them. Make people around them have a different view of them. I think we should not follow them because we are born everyone has their own beauty and let's not lose that beauty!
Gửi lúc: 22:00:19 ngày 19-01-2021
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Every year, millions of people, both men, and women choose to beautify with cutlery. However, plastic surgery has two sides, good and bad.

Comparing the pros and cons before plastic surgery can help people make the right final decision to avoid the bad and the bad after surgery.

Gives you confidence
For some people, cosmetic surgery is very important in increasing self-confidence and improving their beauty.

However, many people obsess over having a perfect face or body that causes them to worry too much, which is a medical condition that needs treatment.

Health
One of the positive aspects of plastic surgery is to help improve the health of patients with birth defects or negative health effects.

For example, some women have very large breasts that cause them a lot of back pain. After breast reduction surgery, the weight of the chest will no longer be heavy causing body aches. In addition, orthopedic surgery or nasal shaping to prevent sinus infection and the removal of male breast tissue to prevent the risk of cancer developing in those tissue layers.

These are just a few of the health problems that can be alleviated through plastic surgery.

Cost of surgery
Cosmetic surgery is quite expensive and is often not covered by health insurance. In addition, patients will suffer financial loss because it takes a period of time off work to recover after surgery.

However, in some cases, if the patient is experiencing health-related problems and requires cosmetic surgery, insurance claims will assist them while performing surgeries such as Accidental or severe recurrent sinus infections can be fixed through nasal resection.
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As the 21st century unfolds, plastic surgery has been considered the elixir of improving physical appearance. The explanation for this trend takes root from the feudal norms and I think it is a setback for women and our society.

In fact, from centuries ago, human all have highly appreciated the beauty. Our ancestor used to apply strict standards for the beauty of women in order to increase women’s dependence such as belly buckle in Europe, bound feet in China, etc. Nowadays, the influence of technology on commerce can explain the rising demand for cosmetic surgery to meet those standards. Commercial companies are understanding customers taste through the collecting and processing of user information using AI, thereby launching marketing campaigns to drive customers to buy their luxury service. Furthermore, technological advances are downing the cost of cosmetic surgeries, buying middle-income customers opportunities to do operations to change the appearance they wanted. This partly contributes to the increase of people using the cosmetic surgery.

On the other hand, this trend also leads to negative impacts on both individuals and society. On the individual level, cosmetic surgery directly damages health conditions of those who use these services. For example, as people implant silicone breast into their body in order to improve their measurements, this might turn on natural defense mechanisms, causing chronic pains or even triggering anaphylaxis accompanied with cytokine storms that could kill the user. On the social level, increasing demand for cosmetic surgery demeans women. This trend underestimates internal beauty such as intelligence, kindness, and altruism. Hence, women and girls might be forced to focus on their appearance rather than their careers and education.

In conclusion, both the feudal standards in the past and the development of technology significantly lead to the increasing demand for cosmetic surgery and I am generally pessimistic about the future it would bring about.
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n our modern lives, the physical appearance has important role. Many people use cosmetic surgery to improve their appearance. There are many reasons for their choices. And I think in some cases, it is positive development and in other cases , it is negative development.nnFirstly, some people were borned with many disabilities. For example, some people have bad teeth, cleft palace… It makes them look ugly. So they want to do operation to look better. And there are some social organization who sponsor for some people like them.nnSecondly, the beauty trends appear o lot in life: high nose, V line face. And they affect to standards of beauty. So people do operations to have appearance like these trends.nnI think is is positive development if people don’t abuse operation. Because some operation lead to deform their face, affect health or even dead.nnIn conclusion, many people use cosmetic surgery to improve their appearance. But they shouldn’t depend on it because everyone has their own beauty.
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