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Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behaviour? Who do you think is responsible?

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It is thought that when a person behaves in an anti-social way, people often blame society. I my opinion, I strongly believe that both society and individuals must be responsible for this issue. This essay will analyse the reasons of anti-social behaviour.

The first cause of crime is lack of caring of families as well as schools. Many children commit crimes at very young age. It is caused by the negligence of parents. For example, teenagers are addicted to computer games and surfing the internet. They spend almost their time on watching programmes full of violence and crime without supervision of adults. As a result, they neglect the moral value of society and imitate violence into their lives which can make them anti-social. In addition, anti-social behaviours happen due to misguided awareness of offenders. Human greed is hard to satisfy. Officials are greedy and selfish to steal money lead up to corruption. And in this situation, the greed of people is the root of problem. The last cause is unemployment and poverty. When people do not have job to cover the cost of living, they usually do something wrong to have money. Therefore, both government and citizens need to take collaboration to minimize the anti-social behaviour. For instance, governments should take measure to create jobs for its residents; and parents and schools should control time and content of using internet of youngster.

In conclusion, it is not fair to blame society when an individual commits a crime. Society and individual must take collaborative actions to prevent anti-social manner.
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An anti – social has been become problem of more country by an individual’s people of thinking. For me, if people didn’t care about volunteering, relation, the less responsibility, etc… so the society became personality disorder such as the wealthy isn’t helping the poor person, the teenager hasn’t relating… Who is responsible about that? I think the family is the first because it’s nuclear in the social. The parents can teach children about relative, learning, helping, sharing and respect when they were young. The secondly, the responsibility is been education system, the regulations from government. In short, we have to join public activities with relation, good behavior, giving benefit advice for them.
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today , i will discuss about the new topic, there are some people think and believe that if an individual behaves in an anti social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is blame . i think this issue is started from their habitat. in this paragraph, i will be analysis and find out the solution for this matter
on the one hand, anti social crime is usually derived from their parent, when they were children, they are often effected by their parent through parent's education for example when anti social crime have unfortunate children-hood , their parent use violence to teach or treat them, this made them suffer and have bad feeling to everything in the life.
on the other hand, that is their habitat. habitat is one of the factor which affect to their behaviour when they mature , to illustrate when you live in a bad places , there are many bad people like robbers , thief, gangsters or crimes you will be affected by them, when you make relationship with them, you learn a lot of disgusting things from them and you will be become one of them
finally , last but not least that is internet, as you can know, internet which is so large and there are advantages and disadvantages on here, so you have to carefully when use internet. there are many cases who are effected by internet like reading or watching fake newspapers or news . those affect extremely serious to resident in a country.
to sum up, So sending children to school when they are enough old is so important. they will be educated to can know how to exactly what they should and shouldn't do
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In this rapidly changing world, people have been spending time playing games or doing any sort of activity on their gadgets. It leads to the implication to leave life without social dependency has created a barrier in societies, more and more people have become formal and for the sake of talk, doing conversation. due to this, a major part of the world has affected and causing a sudden change in human behavior. Sometimes people motivate to commit crimes due to various reasons such as loneliness, abstain the material things, and joyful life, etc. people often blame the authorities and parents, friends, and so on. however, I believe that an individual who commits this offense is responsible.

eminent researchers in the psychology fields have found a pattern in the reflection of works that change social behavior. first, people constrain themselves in a small part of the world which creates social aloofness around the places where they daily present. secondly, introverted nature has also a large number of social impacts as it isolated from other human beings, as a result, people feel inferior and also think like small-minded people. lack of social coexistence in human impacts the harmony between people. on rare occasions, people perpetrate a crime that is unethical and morally disgraceful.

There are situation and circumstance which leads to doing the crime and blaming society or another thing which is not convincing. being anti-social does not infuse the feeling of hatred. in fact, other than introvert behavior, external factors are more affecting to human beings and it motivates to become a delinquent. Hence, it is not appropriate to blame societies, teachers, parents, or accompanies. However, children are very impressionable, also they pursue someone's thought, traits quickly. Though, they do not know what they are doing is right or wrong. Therefore, parents are responsible until children become mature or adult.

In conclusion, No one has the freedom to blame the societies for the dirty deeds of an individual. Additionally, to a larger extent, being introverted or extroverted is just an attribute of humans.
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