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Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, schools have become increasingly more important for students than ever before. Surprisingly, they notice that some topics school taught are very difficult like Math or Physic. Recommending these be alternative instead of mandatory. So in this essay, I will consider both sides of the question and give my own view.

To begin with, there are 2 main reasons to change these subjects into non-compulsory. Firstly, it is clear that subjects can be extremely difficult for a couple of students. Those who can excel most courses but only struggle the rest. As a result, they will have a really hard time trying to catch up with others. Furthermore, some lessons we learn at school may not be very useful. For instance, people who spent several years studying Physic just to have a degree don't know how to apply it to real life.

However, there are still 2 noticeable disadvantages when trying to make these subjects voluntary. The first reason is they are impossible to be replaced. Subjects like Math or Physic have been in school for centuries and changing the current school system is unthinkable. Rather than changing entirely, certain schools can only change the amount of content being taught. Secondly, those subjects are requirements to get a promising career. Without them, the employment rates can drastically decrease in some businesses.

Overall, while there are some advantages to make the change, the drawbacks outweighed it. Personally, I will choose not to adjust the current subjects because of the handicaps that it has.
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Many people feel that it's more likely for kids to choose their favorite field than force them to learn all of kids having into school. I totally agree that children should be decided the subjects they like to study because of the high quality in the learning process and the positive status in their psychology.
First of all, choosing the most-liked subject will help students to be more enthusiam about finishing the homework and listening teacher's the lesson. As a result, their score will be higher that encourage them on continuing to try to do the best while doing excercises. Besides, they will be in honor of their results that makes them to absorb knowledge easier and more advantageous. For example, in 1970, the research of Neal Koblitz pointed that the result in the final test of the class which included students chose their interesting subjects was higher than students who must work on all of compulsory subjects.
One more, the child's psychology can be affected negatively if people force them to learn difficult subjects that they are dislike. Nowadays, the suicide rate of developing and developed coutries's children is rapidly increase because of the huge budget of compulsory subjects at the school. To illustrate, in 2012, according to the investigate of Blum et al, the researchers informed that countries where concentrated on obligatory fields had the percentage of the student destroying themself more serious than nations where children could choose their interesting majors. Especially, the proportion of Chinese, South Korean and Vietnamese kids committing suicide accounted for 17 percent, 8.1 percent and 2.3 percent, respectively.
In conclusion, I completely agree that goverment should give children permission choose their favorite subjects to study in order to creating the useful studying environment and avoiding the negative effect on students.
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There are existed some difficulties which deter a large number of students from approaching to mathematics or some subjects related to sciences. Giving students right to participate in these class or providing them to students liked compulsory subjects, which of these points will be more suitable is a big question of numerous people. I am not agree only one side of this statement because of some reasons which i will point out in my essay.
It is true that maths or philosophy is necessary in almost countries in the world. Children were teaching math from childhood time and they may countinuously learn this subject if they want to learn some field in university such as sciences, technologies. A large number of univeristies provide student several majors so they can select a suitable major and subject to study instead of compulsory. Howerver in primary, secondary and high school people still need to learn math although they are studies in a special school related to drama, numerous students do not agree, they think that math will not help them in their job in the future, they want more time to learn others. However a large number of scientists decline that learning mathematic is important for people to develop their brain, the ability in logic and it will help them too much eventhought some students can not see these benifits. They are some reasons why a musician or a fooballer must learn math. Therefore giving students options about learning math at university will be more outweight than allow them to stop studying it too earlly. Meanwhile subjects such as physics, chemistry, history will help students improve their knowledge which can help them do everything eassier. For instance, when people know a little bit about electricity which they get knowledge from physics, they can keep safe when they fix household electrical appliances.
Philosophy with numerous people, it is a complex subject to study too much theory and it ussually is teached in university it help people improve the social recognition however it is compulsory in a lagre number of countries where the authorities develop from Marxism-Leninism. For instance, in Viet Naml at all universities which operate under the control of Ministry of Education and Training, undergraduate must study these subject meanwhile some international school such as RMIT, USTH student there do not have this subject in academical program. Therefore Philosophy will be very important in some school and it is compulsory if student do not want to learn it they need to look up for the program of each school they want to learn before select them.
Inconclusion, having more and more knowledge is very important because each subject will help people a little bit, math and other science subject is very necessity in our life. However the authorities of each country ought to have the some investigation with student to make some subject likes philosophy more practical and help student take pleasure to thissubject and also can improve soft skill with this knowledge.
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here is no doubt that some students struggle to learning subjects as mathematics or philosophy. Therefore, it is claimed that pupils ought to choose whether or not to learn them. This essay completely disagree with this statement and will develop a reasoned opinion why these subjects should be taught for all students.
To begin with, mathematics and philosophy are paramount subjects to learn how to develop a normal life. This is because math is present in all aspects of life, everything we do is based on a number. For example, the simply act of buying a product in a supermarket demand a person to sum or multiplicate in order to complete the payment. In addition, learning philosophy is vital to learn how to develop a critically thinking. To illustrate this, in order to discuss a problem, the brain has to analize it in advance, and this is taught in phylosophy.
On the other hand, many people believe that these skills should be optional and schools should promote personalized learning. Hence, pupils could be able to learn and boost different skills depending on their individual abilities. As a consequence, they would be more likely to achieve a higher academic level. For example, if a children strenght is biology, he could be taught this subject in more detail with a personalized plan that boost his knowledge and thus become expert in this field. Despite this attractive benefit of leaving some subjects apart, I think that such as math and philosophy are vital for learning those others. For instance, in the cycle of krebs in biology, is extremely important to know how to multiplicate the number of molecules in order to understand the process.
To conclude, although learning individualized subjects can enhance the level of education of a student, I believe that subjects such as math and phylosophy are paramount for making a proper living.
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A perennial problem in mathematical philosophy concerns the relationship between logic and mathematics at their common foundations. Whereas mathematical philosophy is characterized by an interest mainly in formal logic, set theory and fundamental problems. Mathematics, areas of mathematical logic and set theory were developed. Mathematical logic includes the mathematical study of logic and its applications in other areas of mathematics. Set theory is the branch of mathematics that studies sets or sets of objects.
It is a profound puzzle that on the one hand mathematical truth seems to have an intriguing inevitability, but on the other hand, the origin of their "fidelity" remains elusive. The investigation of this issue is called the cornerstone of the mathematics curriculum. Therefore, students must study this subject because it will have a great impact on learning and education in the future. When students do not want to learn these subjects, it is okay, but later when the society develops, it will affect your knowledge later.
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