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In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now to research other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the more increase the popular is, the more dangerous the planet. There will be many problems so we need to look for to remain living. In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. nFirstly, we can slove many problems about environment. When we live on the Earth, we don't protect our environment lead to some of the habitat has already been totally destroyed. Ozon was broken. It affects to our health. Natural disaster occur every year such as flood, typhoon...It makes our life more difficulty.nSecondly, our life become easier than before. Because we can start hard-working, the distance between the and the poor is decrease, thr poor will be decrease. When we move other planets,we can ensure a clean water supply.nFinally, we can slove overpopulation. We will have lots of land to live and work. We don't live in the small house or homeless. nIn sum, we should spend money now to research other planets, such as Mars. It is essential for our life.
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We need to spend more money on discover new planets, which is the answer to the increasingly harsh life on the earth, that's right.
Reasons to promote space studies is the lack of land and accommodation for the ever increasing rate of birth struclling to find a home in crowded city like Ha Noi or Ho Chi Minh City are very popular. However, the most urgent reason lack of natural resources by over exploited leading to some fossil fuel and water reservoir is exhausted. This forces us resort to housing alternatives, the immediate is Mars to the survival of human race.
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Some people argue that living on earth is becoming more and more difficult. Therefore, we have to research for another planet to live. In my opinion, although I believe that It will be hard to live on earth in the future, the searching for the new planet is not necessary.

On the one hand, there are mainly two reasons why life on earth will be unsustainable. One obvious problem is that the rising level of pollution in the land and the ocean which leads to the disproportionate number of the population in these areas. For example, with the polluted ocean, there will be no fish to catch. As a result, fishermen and people who live near the beach will have to move to other areas to survive. Another factor is the overconsumption of natural resources. When the fossil fuels such as oil and coal are exploited to meet the mass demand for energy, they will quickly run out. Unfortunately, it takes ages for these resources to recover

On the other hand, I believe that discovering the new planet is a waste of money. There are various urgent problems which directly affect people's lives that we should consider. One of which is to improve the advances of technology in farming and therefore to reduce the risk of famine. Furthermore, people still have enough time to save the earth, by replacing fossil fuels with environmental-friendly and renewable energy such as wind or solar power, we will reduce the rate of global warming. Take Rex hotel as a simple example; they are now using trucks with the oil made from corns to minimize the amount of emissions.

In conclusion, although it is getting harder and harder to live on the earth, I still believe that there are many ways to deal with this problem rather than to search for another planet to live
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Though space exploration may seem needless and unnecessary given the humanitarian problems Earth is facing in this current moment, we must simply put our place in the universe into perspective. There is so much that is unknown about the world we live in, and space exploration is the key to finding out more about our existence. With at least 200 billion galaxies in the universe, many scientists believe that there must be intelligent life elsewhere in our universe. In fact, the odds that there is only intelligent life on Earth are about one in 10 billion trillion.[4]

Utilitarianism is a philosophy which states that morality is about maximising utility for the majority of the society. 18th century English philosopher, Jeremy Bentham, argued that, “the greatest happiness of the greatest number is the foundation of morals and legislation”.[5] Nearly half of the world’s population are living on less than $2.50 a day, and concurrently, millions of pounds are being spent on further space exploration.[6] If anything, shouldn’t we be cutting this amount? People who believe in utilitarianism will argue that everyone should have the equal opportunity to live a happy and healthy life. Therefore, because such a large number of people are suffering, we must make it our number one priority to save them. Arguably, space exploration will not benefit the millions and millions of people living in corrupt areas, unable to read and write, let alone understand this information. Space exploration is not necessarily something that we need right now. However, poverty is a contemporary issue. In fact, according to UNICEF, 22,000 children die each day due to poverty. Another disturbing statistic is that malaria, an easily curable disease, kills one child every 30 seconds.[7] This means that 4 children have died since the beginning of this article. Artemisinin-based combination therapies (ACTs) are an extremely effective treatment, formed by combining artemisinin-based compounds with other antimalarials; an adult dose costs less than a dollar.[8] Shouldn’t wealthier countries be sending aid to low income countries, rather than spending millions on space exploration, when such a large number of people are dying from such curable diseases?
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