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Some people believe charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Other claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree with?

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People have differing views about whether or not charity associations should only pay attention to needy areas in their country is better than helping people in distress wherever they live. Although it can be argued that there are more benefits to only assisting poor people in their own country, I think that they are responsible for all people who need help.
On the one hand, there is a view that charity organizations should help residents of their own country. According to these people, the organization can support frequently. It will become more convenient and more often when they do charitable activities because of the distance between them is not so far.
On the other hand, I believe that is more beneficial when charity organizations help with any miserable situation. Many reasons lead me to believe this. Firstly, It helps improve relations between countries around the world. For example, helping others when they are in trouble, they will be grateful, then the relationship between the two countries is better. Secondly, poor countries have to face natural disasters, so they need help because they don't have the resources to deal with emergencies.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that it has more benefits if charity organizations give aid to people in great need wherever they live .
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It is believed that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries while others are suggesting that they should also give some attention and aid to the people who are in greater desperation. Having said that, it got me thinking, what if I were asked this kind of question, what would be my answer. So in this essay, I will try to dive into my own thought and see which opinions would I suggest to be the best outcome

As you have already known, a charity organization is a nonprofit organization whose main objectives are to help the world in many different kinds of ways. Such as helping the poor have better education, a better environment or it can be simple as giving them a free meal for the day, as some food banks. It doesn't have to only be helping misfortuned helping humans cause some charities can go to researchers, so they can have the necessities and equipment, fight back some deadly diseases like COVID 19 or uncurable ones like Cancer.

However, the conflict about charity organizations is whether they should spend it all on their own countries or share it to the outside, where they might really those donations. The majority will undoubtedly choose the sharing method, cause if the donation has better benefits in other countries then why wouldn't they support that idea. Personally, I will have to agree on the sharing method but not entirely, cause it depends. Some international donations won't have any benefit the sharer other than some praise especially if that country is in a dire state. They have to support themselves first before doing anything reckless

My conclusion is that charity organization should also support other countries whether they have the right condition to do it
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according to some people, charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Other claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Everyone have their own view but I think it depends on the airm and financial of each organizations.
There are several certain positive impacts that charity organizations can have if they support local people in need. Firstly, these organisations remain directly in touch with the needy. They can see how the money or the other resources provided by them are being used. It has been well said that charity begins at home.
A larger platform is a must if one has a lot to offer in charity. Help activities can be better spread through a larger network. Help need not be always in the form of money. It can be in the form of services also. For example, these organisations can provide doctors and teachers, who volunteer to provide medical aid and also teach in the under-developed nations.
In my opinion, help in any form is good. The condition of one’s country could influence the way of helping. In a developed country, where even the poorest of the poor has the basic amenities of life, it would be better to help in any part of the world where people need help. But, in the case of a developing or underdeveloped country, it would be better to help those around you.

Summing up, the purpose of charity organizations is to help people in need, and it does not matter where this help goes. If people of the home country need help then it would certainly be advisable to help those around you first
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I mean the second opinion, that is: to declare that charities should provide aid to people in great need wherever they live.
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Charity organizations are established which aim for helping needy and eradicating poverty in developing countries. Some people think that charity should only prioritise helping the poor in their own countries, other argue that its distribution of aid to everywhere in need. From my point of view, I firmly agree with the former opinion.

Firstly, The charity organization will gain belief of people in their country and reinforce the foundation of the organisation. When they conduct charity, by the widespread of the social media, residents have chance to witness the kindness and generousity of benefactors. As a result, dwellers sympathize with the hardship the impoverished have to struggle which make them become more civilized. As the charity leaves a positive impression on people, It stimulates the trust of people for government and these meaningful organisation. Therefore, the institutions will be able to earn more investment from companies or dwellers.

Secondly, Giving aid for only internal areas help the organisation to save money and avoid budget distraction. The smaller area you invest money in, the more money you can save and quality the poor can receive. For example, the organization that is active in their origin country can reduce transportation cost because they just have to move in small scale where they are familiar with roads and routes. Furthermore, if they want to help poor people everywhere, the budget will be divided to smaller pieces as there are numerous poor areas in need. I means that the should focus on certain section. Therefore, helping peple in their country would save money and increase the carity quality.

In conclusion, Although, Helping people in need all over the world is ideal act, focusing on offering aid to people in our own country is more realistic and practical.
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