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Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

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No, i don't agree with this argument. As you can see, technologies inventions, such as mobile phone are having an important role in our lives. With technology inventions, we can connect each other easily even we are far away. Because of technology inventions, we are more convenient than before. And about the above argument, i think this problem is also for people who don't have know when to use technology inventions sensible. When you use anything the first regulation you have to be compliance is when and where use them to ensure that they don't effect too much for your live. In my point of view, we are unwilling to use mobile phones only when we can't meet each other. Social is very important, we should go out and make friends as much as impossible, it could help to have more experiences to behave in normal life.
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With the uninterrupted progress of technological industrial. Many cutting-edge productions in that filed are designed to satisfy the progressive demand of people. That also engender many contraries opinion about their side-effect that causes the interpersonal separation. Personally, I do not think the technological facilities cause the social isolation.

First of all, In contrast to that attitude, Those facilities establish interpersonal communication. To illustrate, With the multiple functions of cellphones, People, nowaday, can overcome the distance difficulty to talk with their friends, their family regardless of where they are even from oversea. My mother has found her oversea old friends on facebook recently and she talks to them by merely small phones to derive much valuable memory. So that is a subtle distinction between separation and connection.

The mobile phone also connects the completely stranger together. For example, I remember that in the small chatbox on youtube. Many ones form many countries and cultures have the same interest in the beauty pageant exchange their attitude about the new miss universe has just crowding. That proves that people can take advantage of mobile phones to interact with many individuals around them.

Many ones criticize cellphones lead to the phenomenon that fewer individuals talk with each other directly. But I think the way we exchange merely vary to another mode and expand the area.

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Technology is developing day by day. Many technological inventions are used in our life such as mobile phones. Each person owns at least one mobile phone. This device has good side and bad side, which affects to our daily life especially in communication.
We cannot deny the useful of mobile phone. We can use it for calling and texting to others; reading news; chatting with friends on social network; taking photos; listening to music and so on. It helps people keep up with who are far from each other.
Because of its usefulness, people are depending on it too much. They use mobile phone anytime, anywhere. They spend so much time that they don’t have time to interact with the real person. They can chat on social media with their friends for hours but they can’t talk with their parents for minutes. This is such a sad reality.
In my opinion, we shouldn’t depend on mobile phone. We are just need 2 hours/day to use it. Parents have to supervise youngsters and children using mobile phone. Every small actions can make a big change.
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Section of the society, believe high-tech gadgets especially cellular phones, have disconnected people with the society and made them unsocial and friendly. This essay, however, disagreed with the statement as it has connected people more irrespective of space and time.nnWith the inventions of mobile phones and cellular connections, the world has become a global village. It has made possible for a person to keep in touch with their peers, friends and family living in distant places. For instance, earlier times, people used to meet and share their feelings only when they used to meet in some family functions and holidays, however, with the use of mobile they can share things instantly. Hence, help them to remain more connected with each other.nnIn addition to above, the communication these days has become cheaper. For example, in past, a person has to spend a large amount of money to talk to their far away relatives, which sometimes used to act as a hurdle to connect with people. However, cheap internet plans have made it feasible for them to not only voice call but also do video interactions without bothering about expenses.nnMoreover, the advent of social media website like facebook, twitter has also played a great role in order to develop relationships not just with friends and family, but also with the masses. This has revolutionized the world in a way, anyone can express their ideas and feelings on social site, and address some social or current affair issue from anywhere.nnIn conclusion, there could be many ways to see any inventions. In my opinion, development in technology such as mobile phones have reduced the gaps between people and connect humans more closely
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In my opinion I think the agree and disagree which are suitable. The technological inventions were created to connect human with together. So of course, we would interact with many people than. But our relationships are so weakness, we don't have more time to tell directly. Instead we spend our time for chatting on mobile with many people who are old friends, new friends... It reduces the close-knit of us with people beside you. But in the case, we live far from our family or our friends , it is the best way to interact to our relatives and friends. Finally, it is the both side- negative and positive. It's important to be the way you use it. Anyway I sure it is necessary for everybody nowadays
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