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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that the discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Discipline is important for children to protect them out of the dangerous things. Some people argue that the discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others insist that it is the duty of parents. In my opinion, I agree that parents should play a decisive role in this.

Nowadays, students spent more and more time in schools where the place has an increasing number of students per year. Many schools face overcrowded situation. Consequently, the teacher, who is trying to teach the lesson within the allotted time, is not easy to control behavior of all pupils in class.

On the other hand, parents have looked after their children since their birth. It takes them a lot of time to supervise their kids; therefore, parents have a lot of chance to teach them discipline. Children often copy their parents’ behavior to use; hence, parents must be a good example to their kids.

In summary this essay, teachers in modern schools is not easy to discipline students. It is responsibility of parents to discipline their children doing the right thing.
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Children’s education is the rights and duties of both parent and teacher. Discipline is a part of this process but in these days, it becomes a sensitive topic today in society. Some people think that teachers play a key role to keep students under discipline, while others think that it depends on their family.

To begin with, teaching and shaping children’s behavior is a challenging work with each parent but it is the most important job of family. Children are born innocent and pure to recognize the good and the bad so discipline is an essential part in development children.. Discipline is to instruct people to follow a particular code of conduct which will guide their behavior or set limits to protect from harms and guide them behave properly in all situation, even the parent are not there. Moreover, in family, discipline also means teaching which is built with love and respect.

On the other side, children nowadays even spend more time at school than they do at home. Therefore, teachers play an vital role in children’s education. School discipline is taken when the student breaks a rule created by the teacher or the school. For example, there will have some situations such as going to school late, not completing homework or bullying their classmates. In these circumstances, children must be penalized for their inaccurate actions and thoughts. Without learning and obey regulations in school life, this can cost students their future. Once they will live in a bigger community with more regulations which they have to accept.

To sum up, guiding children behave properly is a long-term and constant process that taking at many places from home to school. Disciplinary actions must be taken by both parent and teacher. Utilizing positive discipline helps them understand consequences of their behavior and train their self-control in all cases.

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Discipline is one of the important factors in the modern company and school. It makes everyone to comply it. Therefore, activities are processing optimally. In this essay, we discuss discipline in a respect of modern schools which is an ever increasing problem some people think tat the discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while other think that this is the role of parents. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both the teachers and parents.

On one hand, teachers have the knowledge of the moral obligation to education their students. The responsibility of teachers guide their students to obey rules in the school. The teachers have to punish fouled students as wrong uniform, truant, coming to school late,... Besides teachers also compliment good students on doing good discipline.

On the other hand, the parents are responsible for education their children to comply with rules at home and in the school. Special thing is teenagers who are mischievous. Because in those ages, they like discovering everything in the world, they often do not obey anyone. Parents should find out their children's characters to train their children the most effectively.

To conclude this essay, the rule of teachers and parents can not be lack of discipline. Every side contribute educating students according to in the positive direction.
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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that the discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. This essay will discuss both sides and give my own opinion.
On one hand, there is no doubt saying that if the discipline is the responsibility of teachers, it will be really helpful in increasing the respect from each student to his teachers. When students do something wrong, if teachers do nothing, students will make that mistakes over and over again, without any fear of being punished by their parents or being laughed at by their friends. That creates disorderliness in students and contempt in students to the role or the power of their teachers. But disciplining a students without knowing about their diseases can make students to be in danger. For example, if a teacher make a student who have a heart attack run around the school yard for 5 times, they can faint or even experience a stroke.
On the other hand, parents should be the person who discipline the students. At first, parents are the closest people to their children/students. So they can easily know the diseases of the students which helps their discipline not to be too much dangerous for students's health. Moreover, if parents enforce strict rules at home, students will be afraid of doing something wrong and will not do that again. In addition, students will be more relaxed if they are punished by their parents than their teachers because being punished by their teachers can be embarrassing and robs student's honor.
In my opinion, I think discipline should be the responsibility of parents because that
causes a lot of advantages and no disadvantage in students's mental health and physical health as well.
Gửi lúc: 22:26:52 ngày 03-09-2019
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Nowadays, discipline is the problem which lots of people usually talk about. Every student must learn the right discipline from the school. While some people believe that parents are accountable for children’s discipline, some others suppose that teachers are responsible.
On one side of the argument, parents play an important role in discipline. The children always copy the behavior of their father and mother. For instance, several parents make sure that their child doesn’t spend too much time playing games. Moreover, the parents are very close to their child so it’s speculated that the children are affected by their parents’ personalities and their discipline. Therefore, the number of parents care about discipline.
On the other hand, the responsibility of teachers in the discipline. The main reason for this opinion is that children spend a considerable amount of time with teachers. Children like a piece of paper and they’re ignorant. It is believed that the role of teachers is as important as parents. For example, in many schools in Vietnam, the children will run around the campus or be whipped if they make some mistakes. Consequence, the teachers make sure that their pupils repeat their mistakes.
To conclude this essay, it is difficult to choose who plays a more important role in discipline. Both parents and teachers are equally accountable to the discipline acquired by children.
Gửi lúc: 22:25:05 ngày 03-09-2019
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