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Most societies have their homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

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People have different views with regard to their homeless people. While it is commonly accepted that the best way to help them is to give them money, I strongly believe that the best way to help them is taught them a skill or job.

There are numerous reasons why there are homeless people. But the most notable is they very poor and the another have their deep pocket. They easy give some little money for poor people that they support help them.

Despite the above arguments, I firmly believe that advice them need to learn to work. In fact, some poor people because they lazy, they beg and have money without need to work. Some other poor people because they with disability can not work. They need to looking for a job suitable with them.

In conclusion, while give money for poor people, I personally prefer that educate them able to work and can make money should also be considered for different reasons.
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According to statistic, it is estimated that there are around 40,000 homeless people and additional 1.5 million families living in shelters. However, the official figure is 23,000 homeless people. That's a enormous community in the world that's need to be improve.

Homelessness in most cases is a result of laziness. When the government rewards it with monetary help, the homeless people will have no motivation to earn money to enjoy home ownership. Instead, they will want to continue to enjoy government benefits. Worse, people who are already struggling to make a living will start assuming that being homeless is the easiest way to gain help from the government. So instead of doing anything to improve their living standards, they too will start queuing up for benefits.

In my opinion, I don't think give them money is the best way to help them. I prefer give them a work or a chance to change their life. An old proverb sums it all, “Don’t give fish to someone, teach them how to fish”. You should give them money if they are old people or handicapped, don't have enough health to do hard job. To improve their employability, the government should give them vocational training. And once they have acquired the necessary skills they should be encouraged to find a job and a home on their own. If the government continues to give them financial assistance, they will not do anything to improve their living standards.

After all, let's try to give them better life quality and give them more work. If you can't, let's gorverment do it. We have to make them see this problem more serious to solve. And I hope homeless people will less day after day to have a better world.

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Homeless is a big problem of every country, even rich countries like American they are a headache to find a way to resolve this problem. However, until now it is still, and the number of homeless is increasing more and more day by day. The reason is that developing economy. It affects directly to live. Therefore, there are more of society's vices. Some people think that to help them; we should give them money. Others believe that we should provide them with a job or let them know how to do something. In my opinion, I prefer to give them a way to earn money.
As I know, a person becomes homeless that have a lot of reasons. Maybe that is a job loss, house fire, personal crisis, mental health, addictions challenges, crimes after prison. The people who job damage and house fire I think it is easier to come back a healthy life than others because they can find a job again. People who have crime after prison are harder because they have recorded and challenging to find a job. Therefore, I think the government should have the school to train them to do something. They should have a company which they can apply to work. As you know, if they can not work, they don't have money to spend on food. They are easy to be a crime again. Also, someone has a personal crisis, mental health, so they need housing to take care of them.
In conclusion, in the short term, sometime when we walk on the street, if I see homeless, I will give them a little money to buy food. For the long term, I will provide homeless a fishing rod for fishing, not provide them with the fish.
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First,I agree with opinion Most societies have their homeless people. Of course they need help but what is the best way we should help them?That's the main problem.

In my opinion, help homeless people by money has both positive and negative.
In other hand, recent study shows some homeless people use money for bad things such as play card, drink wine, smoking and worse than they use drug. Some because of gambling ,they have a big debt but now they are poor, they still gamble.They are addicts.Some others become homeless people because they want to buy something they like or money to spend. So they make themselves poor like wear rags, hurts, take their children and so on. From my point of view, we shouldn't give them money, instead of a loaf of bread because maybe they use money in bad things.

As far as I know, many people are generous and they help homeless people too much,probably this thing is bad because it makes homeless people still lazy and continue don't find a job. That's why they are still poor. I'm certain no people give homeless people money forever and the homeless people can't live like that all their life.

In short, we should help homeless elderly people, homeless children or homeless people can't work.
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Live life in full but we still can not understand it was on the edge of life can not understand it is about the power of the people who are in difficulty fighting the disease for each seconds alive fragility or, as those people are not helpless, missing old men back.They are begging to live through the day in filthy places. There are many people who think for them some of the money will help them overcome the difficulties but the way I do it is just as possible to make them become more misery."the more you give beggars money the more they hard to find motivation to rise. So, if you want to donate, you select the poorest people to do just that. " So why don't we give them a warm roof?
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On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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