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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients on how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

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Recent years, people have become more cautious about the improvement of their well-being. Due to this, it is said to be the doctors' responsibility to provide an appropriate information to patients about the health and educate them. Are doctors the only source to obtain the expected physical condition’s advice? How the other resources could be utilised if any? A thorough scrutiny of the above will lead to an insightful response.

While it is convenient to adopt one aspect over the other, I prefer to present a balanced ergo objective assessment. In my opinion, physicians must provide some relevant knowledge to ill people about their illnesses. However, there are various knowledgeable sources available which can be as useful as the doctors. The subsequent two paragraphs will detail both aspects extensively.

First and foremost, doctors are the most credible and trustworthy source of relevant data. They have been studying and getting experience since years, therefore, it is quite obvious that doctors will have a tremendous amount of confidence for the cure they propose. Secondly, a proper doctor can analyze various symptoms of deathly diseases and provide medicines for those incurable sicknesses. For instance, Cancer or Tuberculosis victims need to have proper therapy and medications from an experienced person than any blogs available on social media.

On the contrary, internet posses the e[removed]bitant amount(plethora) of data related to any diseases we can think of. Internet contains not only the symptoms but also how the medications reacted to the illnesses and how long it took to get better. Furthermore, doctors charge a fortune for any kind of treatment and education to patients which could be reduced to a particular extent with the help of internet technology. In support of the above, if people are aware of the symptoms they face, it might be easy to get the medicines mentioned on the internet.

Keeping all of the above-mentioned facts in mind, benefits such as advice from an experienced doctor and adequate medication are evident. In contrast, components such as the doctor's tremendous fee and experiences from other patients are well worthy of equivalent consideration. To conclude, as is with most things in life, there are two sides to the matter. Fortunately, in this case, both of these are constructive should be implied moderately.
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In recent decades, the public has been paying their attention to healthcare at an increasing rate. Therefore, as the highly respected profession, doctors should hold the most responsibilities to spread their knowledge and encourage patients to improve health.


There are plenty of reasons why doctors should be the ones taking steps to educate their patients about healthcare. First, since doctor profession requires medical students to go through a rigorously recognized education process about not only human but also relating factors, they could contribute enormous efforts to a better healthcare system by education. In fact, it takes medical students six to even more than ten years to complete their university, which is the longest schooling profession as it ensures high qualifications in medical workforce. Second, by working in hospitals and private clinics on a daily basis, doctors have chances to meet patients regardless of ages or health problems. As a result, their working environment is conducive to make upsides of the healthy lifestyle known to the public.


Another compelling reason is that knowledge about self-care is still in high demand. By concentrating on politics and celebrities, there is not enough space on not only national but also local media channels for healthcare news. Therefore, it requires doctors with their professional advice to place more emphasis on promoting workable preventive avenues to protect people from diseases, especially infectious ones in order to avoid any outbreak. In addition, the internet allows everyone to access open resources about health advice and tips that are not certified or inspected thoroughly. In order to help patients avoid that misinformation, doctors should transcend their regular duties by educating not only their patients but also the public with precise self-care practices.

In conclusion, educating patients on how to improve their health should be one of many responsibilities of doctors. This benefits not only patients but also doctors themselves
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_ I agree with this!
_ Being a patient must be responsible for listening to the doctor. Everything the doctor offers is good for myself and is one of the ways to improve our illness.
_ There are cases where the patient went to the doctor and the doctor gave the prescription but still deliberately made the left and then blamed the doctor for not working well, which affected the reputation of doctors and hospitals.
_ So please listen to the doctor to improve your condition ?
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Over recent years, people have become more cautious about the improvement of their well-being. Due to this, it is said to be the doctors' responsibility to provide an appropriate information to patients about the health and educate them. Are doctors the only source to obtain the expected physical condition’s advice? How the other resources could be utilised if any? A thorough scrutiny of the above will lead to an insightful response
While it is convenient to adopt one aspect over the other, I prefer to present a balanced ergo objective assessment. In my opinion, physicians must provide some relevant knowledge to ill people about their illnesses. However, there are various knowledgeable sources available which can be as useful as the doctors. The subsequent two paragraphs will detail both aspects extensively.
First and foremost, doctors are the most credible and trustworthy source of relevant data. They have been studying and getting experience since years, therefore, it is quite obvious that doctors will have a tremendous amount of confidence for the cure they propose. Secondly, a proper doctor can analyze various symptoms of deathly diseases and provide medicines for those incurable sicknesses. For instance, Cancer or Tuberculosis victims need to have proper therapy and medications from an experienced person than any blogs available on social media.
On the contrary, internet posses the e[removed]bitant amount(plethora) of data related to any diseases we can think of. Internet contains not only the symptoms but also how the medications reacted to the illnesses and how long it took to get better. Furthermore, doctors charge a fortune for any kind of treatment and education to patients which could be reduced to a particular extent with the help of internet technology. In support of the above, if people are aware of the symptoms they face, it might be easy to get the medicines mentioned on the internet.
Keeping all of the above-mentioned facts in mind, benefits such as advice from an experienced doctor and adequate medication are evident. In contrast, components such as the doctor's tremendous fee and experiences from other patients are well worthy of equivalent consideration. To conclude, as is with most things in life, there are two sides to the matter. Fortunately, in this case, both of these are constructive should be implied moderately.
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It is acknowledged that doctors are at bat in our life because we cannot overcome any diseases without them. Some people hold an opinion that besides their professional knowledge, doctors should be responsible for instructing their patients to boost their health. Personally, I am in favor of this statement.n n To begin with, I wholeheartedly agree that doctors should take responsibity for teaching their patients how to improve their health as a result of conscience. When doctors often have a talk with every patient about some ways to improve their health, doctors will love their patients so much. Hence, doctors' morality also will be enhanced. Consequently, a doctor who have a good ethics along with a high-level will be appreciated by his colleagues as well as his sick people.nn Another fundermental reason is that if doctors hold responsibility to educate their patients to reinforce their physical condition, patients will get less sick than ever before. In the information age, virtually everybody can look up any information about their diseases on the Internet. Nonetheless, there is some fake or wrong information which is harmful to their health. However, doctors' advice is usually precise to patients. By taking doctors' advice, patients can avoid contracting diseases.n n In short, the above illustrations provide solid evidences on my viewpoint about the responsibility of doctors to help their patients to boost health. Doctors are considered as affectionate mothers so it is a nice action when doctors take care of their patiens.n
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