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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowaday, many people think the development of communication brings us lots of benefits but other don’t agree with this statement. Let’s consider what are the advantages and disadvantages of the online communication in our life.
First of all, we can’t deny that the online communication makes our life easier and more convenient. For instance, you can connect quickly with your family and your friends by calling or sending message, which no matter where you are. Secondly, only with a smarphone or a laptop, you can make new friends and texting with them even when they are in the other country. You can also improve your English skills and you will be able to become more confident when communicating with natives in the real life. However, on the other hand, we can see that the development of online communication also brings some disadvantages. It won’t be good if we use it in a long time. Because it’ll make you have some health problems, particulary skin cancer. Many people say that using social media help them never be alone. That seems obvious but if you rely too much on online communication, your ablity to communicate will be reduced and you will probably be depressed.
In conclude, the development of online communication is helpful or not, which depend on our ways of using it.
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Communicating is very simple now due to the development of online comunnication. It means you can meet anyone you want by social networks. So, someone may think that people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. I agree with it, but in a different way.
I think that online communication is a convenient way to connect to the world and find new friend. You just need an electronic device and Internet to do it. To be specific, the widespread use of social network and messenger provides them with chances to become friends with each other. One of the best functions of it is Video Call. You can meet anyone you want in a special call, which transmits images and videos. Sometimes, it will make you get rid of loneliness as well.
However, online communication is not a real environment. Maybe you don't know who you made friend was, and it's not safe for your personal imformation. Moreover, online communication somehow can "improve your loneliless", because of your concentration to your device so you may neglect everything around you. In fact, many people have a tendency to connect with only friends through the Internet without conversation with acquaintances in real life. So why do they want to find "new friends" while they don't now about their "real friends"?
In conclusion, online communication has both pros and cons, but I think its disadvantages is expressed more than advantages, so communiation in real life is much better.
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From 1900s people started to used radio to communicated . Next we used phone . now ,we have e-mail, facebook,zalo,...on computer and smartphone.People will not be alone but we'll not talk with others to communite ,that's so bad. In internet will have many bad people ,too.If someones fell sad and go on facebook, the bad people will talk bad things.Ang i'm agree about that .I only want to write letter because it's safe.
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Nowadays, online communication is becoming more and more universally popular, the number of user increases rapidly. People strongly believe that thanks to it, not only will lonely permanently disappear in their lives but social communication is likely to provide them with an opportunity to make friends with others. Personally, I partly agree with this opinion as follows.
From positive perspectives, this means of communication is able to forges closer relationships among people worldwide through the Internet. To be specific, the widespread use of social network and messenger provides them with chances to become friends with each other. They have chatted on the Internet for a period of time,hence, they have mutual understanding of characters, personalities or interests. For instances, I have got acquaintances with an English soccer player in a group for fans of sports on Facebook. Apparently, we have many interests in common, especially our consuming passion for soccer.Additionally, This means of communication is also considered to be the interaction tool liberating them from loneliness as well. It is no doubt that some people have to leave home to attend higher education or even work in a strange city at the age of 18. Nevertheless, distance does not matter, as all they need is a computer or smartphone, they can reduce their homelessness by giving their family a video call through the Internet in their free time.
However, in fact, many people have a tendency to connect with only friends through the Internet without conversation with acquaintances in real life. This issue leads to distant relationships among them. It is undeniable that youngster would desire to own a smartphone rather than play games with friends, which gradually lead to . As a result, I have voiced concern about the reduction of outdoor activities as the shortage of interaction in real life. Are you capable of imagining how quiet will the life be?
By way of conclusion, even though online communication has both pros and cons, its advantages overweight its disadvantages due to the potential advancement.
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The widespread popularity of computer-mediate communication has enabled people's connectivity to a great extent. I agree that in this digital world it is very difficult to be alone and it undeniably enhances new friendships. This essay will point out the pivotal role of mediated communication in facilitating new friend circles and eliminating the feeling of loneliness among people.

There are myriad benefits of online communication. Firstly, this type of communication has astonishingly mitigated the geographical barriers. Today it is possible to contact family or friends either through e-mails or instant messaging in a seconds time, without bearing massive bills for using it. As websites such as Facebook, Skype or Whatsapp provide quick and convenient access to either message or call anywhere in the world, therefore one is in constant touch at any place and time. For instance, I starkly remember how I obviated the feeling of being lonely or homesick through online communication. Thus, it is clear that in today's digital world one cannot feel lonely anywhere.

Secondly, the advent of electronic communication has successfully assuaged cultural differences among dissimilar nationalities. The millennials are mostly digital natives and lead a virtual life. The social networking websites and the internet are being used by everyone and through them, it is convenient to connect people residing miles away. To illustrate, I reside in India and have never been abroad but because of this mediated communication, I have pals from various countries. This not only promotes exchanging each other cultural beliefs and languages but also help me in understanding their lifestyles and culture. Thus, the central role of online communication in making friends is quite evident.
To conclude, I reaffirm my position that electronic communication affirmatively enhance friendships and eliminates negative emotions like loneliness. I hope that much more people realise the advantages of online communication in future.
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