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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This has can lead a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. Which problems do children face when going online without parents supervision? How can these problems be solved?

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There is no disputing fact that many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. It does not unreasonable to suggest that it is not a good idea when children are exposed to social media and internet too much as well.
There are many disadvantages when children are exposed to the internet at the early age. Firstly, there are plenty of information which people from all over the world share and post on it. Children can not distinguish good news from bad news. If children access to bad news, it can have huge influence on them. There personality gradually change. It will become worse and worse. Secondly, adolescent who are superficially may not listen to their parents and keep on associate with strangers. So the strangers can know their personal information such as : profie, schedule,... Strangers can take advantages to you or they sell your information to somebody else. In addition, on the Internet is many kidnappers and bad people. Everyone can create own fake profile on website as a young boy or girl and persuade children to go outside . Children may have trouble if they listen to strangers and follow them. They even cost their life because of being stubborn and ignorable to the warning that their parents give them.
That why, parents must notice their children's internet conversations with others. But parents shouldn't disturb their personal life. Moreover, mother and father should explain to children the problems that wait them on the Internet.
To conclude, parents shouldn't let their children access to social media and internet at the early age at best.
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Nowadays, technology processes rapidly especially the growth of internet. It lead to many changes in a plenty of families. Each of them have mobile devices such as iPad, smartphone, laptop and so on. So that, many children is too passionate to ignore everything around them. There are so lots of problems that they certainly face when going online without parents supervision.
Firstly, I want to tell you some disadvantages of the Internet that can be harmful for children's health especially their eyes. If they spend too much time using the internet, their eyes will be dizzy.
Moreover, one of the purposes they usually access to the internet without supervision is playing game online. Their is many kinds of games that the players has to pay real money to buy VIP account or card. However, children don't have the ability to buy them. So they try to steal money from their parents to satisfy their own needs. That is the way they are easily pretended to do wrong things.
The last disadvantage of using the internet without parents supervision is the websites with unaccordant contents for children's age. There are so much information in the internet that parents have to control them. Because children maybe can meet some violent, reactive and depraved contents.
Finally, Parents must spend more time caring for their children instead of being busy in their work. It's important for children to spend valuable time on their friends and their families instead of on the internet. They need to learn some essential life skills such as survival skill, interpersonal skill and so on. Parents should encourage them to participate in outdoor activities. So that, they can gain seft-confidence.
Therefore, children have to realize their actions and the extreme disadvantage of the internet. Nurturing children in the reasonable ways contributes to the development of social and country.
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The harm to children using smartphones and tablets:
+ Smartphones can change the relationship between parents and children.
+ Smartphones and tablets can be "addictive".
+ Smartphones and tablets affect sleep.
+ Affects the ability of children to learn.
+ Affects the child's ability to communicate.
+ Increased susceptibility to mental illness.
+ Can lead to obesity.
+ Make children more aggressive.
+ Hide the risk of infection.
+ Lack of community skills.
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Do you can be able to be status, must be for children from the internet because it is it is very much to the tiny, to the baby, the little girl. For the reading books .vì book is a good action for young .Giáo trẻ thu thập nhiều ý kiến. can read all in the time of the relax, you can you want the computer that that you can be able to be like the network internet watch screen .Khi reading books, should choose a valid location for children.
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A recent survey of more than 1,000 mothers of primary school children found that the percentage of children using computers, smartphones, tablets ... was so unexpected (70%). This number is worth thinking about, it is even higher than the rate of children know the skills such as self-change, management when stray ... Technology era, imitate parents use the device that's fast. Therefore, you can not neglect to teach your child safe internet skills.


For children, the internet is a very new and fascinating world. It is a place for them to entertain, express themselves, express emotions that they often find difficult to share with their parents. However, in addition to the positive aspects, the internet also reveals some negative points, which limit the child's ability to communicate with the outside world, reducing the time spent participating in physical activity, lazy disclosure emotions, sharing with people in real life. Children no longer find books on the library as before, to search for any information, just click, after a few seconds, they can find what they want. Therefore, the Internet is easy to lead to imbalances in life, children tend to cover difficulties, psychological vulnerability, easy to depend on technology applications.

Many parents have failed to offer safe methods for their children in using the Internet because they perceive computers as an effective and harmless learning tool. They argue that children will be protected from external threats if they are at home or in their own rooms and play with their computers. But this is not always true. As with all other aspects of life, parents need to monitor and talk with their children about Internet activities. You can also install a computer security software to help prevent unwanted websites.

Tips for Parents Helping Kids Stay Safe Online:

- Always remind your child about the four security principles when accessing the internet, that is: do not give out personal information, do not meet strangers, do not share passwords, there is a regulation of time use the Internet.

- Skillfully discuss, remind your child to develop conventions before use, to let children know the dangers that may arise to raise awareness.

You should only give your child limited access to computers, control the time and activities of children on the machine in a strict manner, and orient them to use the computer for the purpose of learning and entertainment. healthy. It is best to focus your child on a particular subject that needs to be used, so that your child will use it for his / her learning purposes.

- Concerned about the time to eat and sleep, children's activities, avoid the children because too busy forgetting the habit of living moderation.

- You should talk frankly with your child about everything related to the virtual world. Encourage your child to use the internet safely and actively. Talk openly with your child about network challenges, difficult situations that may arise. Make some resolutions and make sure you stay with when your baby is needed.

- Need to know about the internet to be able to control the content of children's access. Regularly communicate with other parents about ways to educate, control their children, connect with the school ...

- Helps you balance your life and life on the Internet by engaging in social activities. From there the child will have a clear awareness of himself and build healthy relationships with others in society, train his independence, have emotions, experience interesting from the actual collision .

Teach your children to use the internet safely, exploit best the benefits of the internet so that they can grow healthy and properly.
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