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Nowadays celebrities are mainly famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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There's a growing concern that celebrities are mainly famous for their glamour, wealth than for their achievements. Many people think that this kind of attitude is not a good example for the young generation. In my opinion, I agree with these behaviours of celebrities are bad examples for young generation but there are other famous people are popular due to their outstanding accomplishment.
On the positive side, to be the best of my knowledge ,many famous people become enormously popular because of their wealth and their richness. They achieve fame by raising funds for charity. They donate money, food, medicine to the poverty and disabled people. Or they launch a campaign which encourage everyone to do charity , help people who are more miserable than us. For example, BTS corporate with UNICEF to launch a meaningful campaign called LOVE MYSELF so as to quell violence to children who are suffering from horrible behaviour of cruel people.
On the negative side, there are celebrities who are famous due to their glamour and scandals. But they are not popular because of their talent and their will to achieve reputation and fame genuinely. It is clearly true that some people make scandals with other celebrities in order to make everyone know them. They don't care whether that is good and they may ruin other celebrities's reputation. Their behaviour must be bad role mode for young generation who want to be famous people in the future. Or there are many artists who are hugely popular although they are unable to compose songs and they don't have talent for performing on the stage. They are famous because they have money and corrupt reporters to write more news about them.
In conclusion, many famous people are well known for their wealth but some of them use their property for good purposes and some of them use their money for bad purpose.
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Nowadays, many people know about a renowned person just because he or she is rich and attractive. People do not care much about what he or she has done. Having a lot of money and a good face makes a person become famous. Some people believe that this can affect the young badly. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea.

On the one hand, it is a fact that many famous people become popular due to their lifestyle, instead of their achievements these days. For them, more appealing means more famous. They can do anything to become good-looking, like having cosmetic surgery, keeping fit by not eating anything. Therefore, many teenagers now just care about their appearance. For example, my friend, Nhu, just spends all her time learning how to make up, and she always get bad results. Moreover, some renowned people always show their fancy lifestyle to the public, like spending a lot of money shopping, parties, etc. This can make young people now do not know how to save money.

On the other hand, there are some famous people are known for their being industrious, such as Adam Khoo, Emily Blunt, etc. These people have achieved success in their life and have been admired by people around the world. They can inspire people to never give up.

In conclusion, having known about one person just due to his or her glamour and richness can have a bad effect on young people, such as obsession about their appearance, wasting lots of money, etc. There is no doubt that famous people have their influence on the young. Admiring a famous person is good as long as that person achieves a lot of success. This can help people try themselves to be successful.
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It's not false to say that celebrities are mainly famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements. Some people think that's a bad example for young people to do. Actually, I not only agree with that opinion but also disagree. Everything always has two sides: one good and one bad.

It's true that many people become popular due to their luxurious life or glamour instead of making achievements. They aren't talented as the others artists so they think they should make attention by showing their glamour and wealth lifestyles to the public. Some celebrities inspired negative thinking can destroy society. Moreover, famous people can be found on advertisement about smoking, drugs and many criminal activities. If young people follow their lifestyles, there might be dangerous result that no one can imagine.

But in the other hand, many famous people who have success by their achievements and incredible acts. They have big passionate, strong determined and hard working to make their masterpiece of arts and great. One example of strong determined celebrities is Taylor Swift. Before she always sang country music. Although her music is not popular as others kind of music, she won "Album of the Years" and "Best Country Album" of 52th Grammy Awards. And in 2014, she do a real pop album is called "1989". There was no country song in that album. And it once again shot to number one.

In conclusion, celebrities are mainly famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. But there're also many people become famous by their working. They say the words "bad example" but each person should think that who is the one you should follow. "Good or bad example" depends on you.
Gửi lúc: 22:01:03 ngày 27-11-2018
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Entertainment is the essential part of the world, it comes with celebrities, indeed. People have their own idol based on their preference, some become a fan because of the glamour and wealth of that celebrity, some admire their perfect acting and achievements. For me, I respect their own fondness, but I feel that becoming a fan of a celebrity just because of their sexy body or their fortune is not a true one.


On one hand, some celebrities are well-known by their appearances and their costly parties, mansions, etc. Young people become fans of them as they admire it and want to enjoy the life of a wealthy celebrities through the TV. It has it own benefits. For instance, by admiring their costly daily life and their fashion, people can widen their knowledge about this term. However, the disadvantages of it is huge and can affect badly to young generations. They may be the fashion victims. They buy clothes and cosplay their celebrities which cost a lot of money.


On the other hand, many people gain their fortune and famous by their capability and outstanding performance Those are always be commemorated by their masterpieces. They will permanently be in our hearts and might be a great example for young generations to follow their footsteps.


In the conclusion, celebrities who are mainly famous for their glamour and wealth create a bad example for the youngsters and their fame cannot be steady by the time. On the contrary, ones who are well-known not for their lifestyles but their outstanding performances and great achievements, however, will live immortally with their masterpieces and would be a good example for young descendants.
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