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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is no doubt that the advent of social media has been changing a part of the world. Everything has its two sides. Although Internet's utilization has drawback such as the threat to privacy, they have a huge amount of advantages and I will support this argument.
The very first and dangerous disadvantage of many Internet's users is theft of personal information and data. With some clicks of spam links, users can leak their information such as Email ID, credit credential. Moreover, Internet become the place that people show their thoughts and in many cases, that could hurt the feeling of some people. We do not have bully in the real life, we now also have bully in the Internet.
On the other hand, social media has much shining shine. It can be noticed that Internet has revolutionized the means by which people used to communicate. Thanks to Internet, people can share everything with each other although they are apart thousands of miles. They can talk and see the faces of friends, relatives,..by an easy, convenient and cheap mean. It can be said that social media connect people together. Furthermore, in the modernize society, there are many jobs, many opportunities are posted online. People utilize Internet to get these chances.
In conclusion, social media has both advantages and disadvantages. In my view of point, the shinning side of social media outweigh the dark side.
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Nowadays, with the development and progress of technology science, the world more and more change quickly every day. Especially, the first development of smart information is making many conditions and a chance for every one communicated, connected, shared so-so by modern media social – especially the development more and more diversity of internet, include media social. But anything has also two slides. There are positive and negative
The youth approached the media social many years ago so their knowledge extends about many fields. They can use it to find new information for their studying or career easily. The most ways that the youth usually use to communicate together thought media social such as watching the film online, talking online, email…. The large benefit of media social has accepted for many years, and now it became a tool that necessary for the life of a human. If you can use it properly, it will help you a lot. The medical social is bringing the human many exceptional features and modern suitable for the demand of human now. People can connect with the foreigner on the world and they can share much information together, they can learn many knowledge and skills. For business, many people use it to improve their business and advertising for their products on the market.
However, the youth has used medical social very much, so they seem to depend on their iPhone or you can see anywhere the people always look at the screen on their hands. The children don’t communicate directly with everyone because they are concentrated on the internet. In order word, it also affects your health in the future and makes you became more tired if you use it
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There is no doubt that many people rely more on the Internet for the latest news or trends. Even though its utilization has disadvantages such as the threat to privacy, I believe they are outweighed by its advantages and I will support this argument with special examples.



To begin with, some people that posting private information on the Internet websites may bring security problems. That's why once the individual shares their current location online, their enemies or opponents can plan strategies to hurt them. To illustrate, in recent times the number of attacks on women have increased because their movements can be easily monitored through social media. If an individual is not posting any secure information online, such attacks can be lowered. Therefore, many people oppose the extensive use of social networks to protect their privacy and security.



On the other hand, I agree with the argument that many people nowadays are utilizing social media as a common platform to connect with each other. The reason for this is that with the help of renowned websites like Facebook, Twitter and Linked-in, people can connect to friends and family living in different parts of the world and also make new connections. For example, multiple job requirements are posted online; people who are subscribed to such information can utilize this information. There are also many newspapers that post the same information but print media takes more time than online media to reach the public. Hence, new generation is making an advantage of fast and reliable media.



In conclusion, there are advantages as well as disadvantages associated with Internet usage. According to me, the benefits such as faster connectivity and access to information outweigh the drawbacks.
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The MOONCAKE is a traditional Chinese pastry which is enjoyed during the annual Mid-Autumn festival by many people around the world. The name “mooncake” comes from this festival, since families gather to celebrate this lunar festival and watch the full moon. MOONCAKES are also an iconic Chinese dessert with a colorful history dating back thousands of years.

MOONCAKES are baked into round shapes, but varies in sizes and the varied ingredients based on different areas’ interpretation. It is commonly made with a thin crust, thick sweet filling from lotus seed paste, and contains two yolks from salted duck eggs. The round duck egg yolks perform the full moon. The top layer of the mooncake includes symbols of the moon festival imprinted on them or is also decorated to have good luck characters.
The Mid-Autumn festival is considered as the second most important holiday in China after the Lunar New Year. The annual festival is held on the 15th day of the 8th month on the lunar calendar. The origins of this festival dates back to Shang Dynasty (1600 – 1046 BCE) where farmers celebrate the harvest of the crops and express thanks to the Mountain Gods. The MOONCAKE became the offering as the public worshiped the moon during every autumn’s lunar. There are also a great number of legends and folktales associated with the origins of moon cakes which have circulated.

Another importance is the shape of the moon as well as mooncake. In Chinese, reunion “团圆” contains the word “round circle” that symbolizes the family circle, as well as

completeness and unity in Chinese culture. Thus, the round mooncake is not only a delicacy and dessert enjoyed, but it emphasizes the special importance that Chinese people attach to family
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Recently, social media is a popular trend of all ages in over the world. Social media brings people some benefits to human's life. Besides, it also causes some nagative aspects. In my opinion, I believe that the disadvantages of social media outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that social media brings people some benefits. Entertainment is one of good benefits of social network. Some media social such as Facebook, Instagram give people more joyful by helping them update their information and comment their thinking with other people about some fields or some simple things happen everyday life. Moreover, using the social media often can help them widen their knowledge and information which are updated everyday by different people in social websites. As a result, the more information they get, the less foggy they will be.
On the other hand, social media have a lot of disadvantages besides it benefits. The most important things which is cared by most of people using social media is the risk of personal information being stolen by hackers. These personal information can be used for bad purposes such as stealing money from ATM or using information on social network to kidnap. Furthermore, using social media people can be addicted to it. The data of some recent studies have shown that there are more and more people spending too much time on Facebook everyday. Consequently, it leads to bad results at school and at work. In addition, using too much social media prevents people from exchanging information in real life and having less conversation with other members in family which cause the lack of skill of communicating between people and people.
In conclusion, social media brings human some benefits. However, I still believe that the disadvantages of using social media outweigh the advantages.
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