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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.Which one do you agree with? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, we are living in fast-paced world and it seems that people have less leisure than it was in the past. In the wake of this phenomenon, the issue how to use the free time efficiently triggers the debatable opinions between to spend time progressing mind via intellectual activities or to give mind a rest entirely.

On the one hand, the viewpoint that people should utilize the spare time for brain-training activities such as doing puzzles, reading healthy books or play sports to boost mindset. Some people believe that they can gain success if cultivating and practicing these habits regularly compared to the lazy people just want to relax. These activities play a significant role in life. Doing other thinking activities drives people further escalating the creation as well as the ability of resolving problems logically. For instance, reading books helps broaden knowledge which can be advantageous in the future.

On the other hand, some people are too busy with duties of work, family and society. After a hard-working day, they do not want to do anything and just need to relax. They consider that reading philosophical or political books with lots of cryptic perspectives even makes themselves more tired and overload. Setting mind at rest means to cease both mental and physical work. The interesting fact that mind-free is actually a good way to improve the brain. The reason is that the break phase to revitalize the brain is necessary. When relaxing, your brain can recall and synthesize all information, knowledge and experiences occurring during that day and turn them into sustainable memories. Moreover, to keep mind at rest is also a skill that not easy to do. To illustrate it, one of the popular mind-free methods is meditation. This therapy is not only to rest mind but also to train people’s mind to focus and increase awareness of themselves and surroundings.

To sum up, after discussing both these views, I consider that it is better to combine them for the best effects. It means people must balance time to relax mindset as well as do thinking activities. The reason is if you only practice brain without any break time or via verse, it can lead to lessen productive in work.

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There is no doubt that leisure time is always the time people relax after a hard-working day. Some people think that free time should be used for activities like reading books and doing puzzles whereas others opine that it is necessary for them to rest their mind. From my perspective, both ways are essential for human.

In the first place, reaing books or doing something like this, actually, makes people more energetic. Indeed, all the academic theory that they have studied very hard from years to years will be useless if they do not practice it regularly by taking part in extra-curricular activities. Moreover, these activities in free time also helps human increase their level of an intelligent quotient. They are able to see problems in different perspectives and they will be more proficient in dealing with them. Only by this way, can people accumulate more useful experience about life as well as fundamentary soft skills which are keys to succeed in future life.

On the other hand, resting the mind is also regarded as an effective remedy for human to relax after working hard all day. In fact, the modern lifestyles are full of stress and people have to do more work with fewer days off, which leads to chronic headache. Therefore, taking a nap without thinking or worrying is very essential.It will help their brains more comfortable and healthier to start a new day with new challenges and strain. If people continue to ignore the role of resting mind, the consequence will be unpredictable.

To sum up, both taking part in activities and resting mind are necessary for everybody to ensure they are healthy enough to complete their work.
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There are many things can be done in the free time. Some people say that it is a wise choice to spending this time reading book or doing word puzzle. Others claim that it is vital to use this time to just rest. I believe that each activity will be suitable depending on the situation.
There are several reasons why people spending their leisure time to reading books or doing puzzle. Reading books is a really good thing to do to get more information about a large quantity of events, cultures, histories and knowledge in the world. Books can give people imagination, inspiration and relaxation. It is a quotation which state that “You may delay but time will not’’. Time flies every single second. It will be good if using more real time as much as possible, especially when we are young and have to learn many things. It is true that nobody can get enough knowledge just by studying in school. Even when we work in companies, it is important to learn everyday to improve the major knowledge then get the higher salary.
However, sometimes, the load of work is over, people get stressed, it is fine to just relax the mind. The choices of sleeping, walking out, talking with friends, travelling is much better than keeping the brain work out. At this time, reading books or doing word puzzle will make ourselves more tired.
In conclusion, people has their different free time. It is necessary to use this time smartly. Every activity is depend to every person at every situation.
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in my opinion, in your free time you should read books, news ỏ comics . It cans improve the intelligence and helps our brain flexible . Besides, it helps us to form good habits.we should not sleep too much in our free time because it is very dangerous for our health .The less active parts should not be flexible. It will make you fat and become more sluggish.So I think while you are free you should read books to join the club, play sports, should sleep a little to calculate the apple but not sleep too much. Because lack of sleep will be extremely tired and work poorly.
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Nowadays, most of people are busy, not only their work in society but also their household work, specially, the women. So they have very little leisure time to relax or spend time for themselves . some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, other people argue that it is necessary to rest the mind during leisure time. Everyone has a idea to protect his/her opinion and I think each opinion has the separated advantages and disadvantages.
With the first view, I would say that If we know to use leisure time to practice the mind, It will have many advantages
Firstly, using the leisure time improves the mind by reading and doing word puzzles that will help people to widen their knowledge, improve their memory,... Morever, It is a good way for people to learn more things about the world, but after a hard working day, if they spend all time for brain activities, which will affects the mental and make people feel tired, strongly stress. these factors is the main reason for many serious diseases such as: headaches, mental trouble,etc..
On the other hand, most of people want to spend their leisure time to relax and reduce stress by watching TV, listening to music , going out with their friends or even they can go to the gym to improve their health because they have to do hard all day, they will feel backaches, and aches and pains. So It is essential for them to spend time to rest the mind.
To sum up, I agree with that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time because the most important thing in our life is physical health. Having health, we will have all. So we should protect our physical health when it is not late and use time reasonably so that we can improve both the physical heath and the mind more and more.
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