Time : 2016-02-28 20:48:53
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Dear Alice,
Hello my friend! Today , I'm feel very happy because I will to tell you about the person I love most .
There's an English saying :" The heart of the mother is the school of child". It's true that, my mother is the person I love and admire best. She is 40 years old. She isn't beautiful but she is very charming. She is an English teacher in a high school. My mother is helpful and generous. She always helps other people, especially the poor. I can say that my mother is a wonderful woman, a capable wife and a kind mother. She loves her family very much . She both works very hard and takes good care of her husband and two children. My mother is a good example to my older brother, me and even my father. She not only gives us delicious food, beautiful clothes ... but also teaches us many useful things. She always wants us to be honest citizens, to work hard, to think of other people more than of ourselves. My mother often said the most precious thing in human' life was to be loved and respected by everybody. For me, she is my mother as well as my friend. She is always beside me and shares with me everything in my life and in my study. I can say that my mother is the warmest, kindest woman in the word and it's very happy and lucky for me to have such a mother. Mom , I cannot live without you. I love you so much!
That't about the person I love best . How do you think about my mother? Write me soon , please.
Best wishes,
Linh

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Dear Alice,
Hello my friend! Today , I'm feel very happy because I will to tell you about the person I love most .
There's an English saying :" The heart of the mother is the school room of child/The mother's heart is the child's school-room". It's true that, my mother is the person I love and admire best. She is 40 years old. She isn't beautiful but she is very charming. She is an English teacher in a high school. My mother is helpful and generous. She always helps other people, especially the poor. I can say that my mother is a wonderful woman, a capable wife and a kind mother. She loves her family very much . She both works very hard and takes good care of her husband and two children. My mother is a good example to my older/elder brother, me and even my father. She not only gives us delicious food, beautiful clothes ... but also teaches us many useful things. She always wants us to be honest citizens, to work hard, to think of other people more than of ourselves. My mother often said the most precious thing in human' life was to be loved and respected by everybody. For me, she is my mother as well as my friend. She is always beside me and shares with me everything in my life and in my study. I can say that my mother is the warmest, kindest woman in the word and it's very happy and lucky for me to have such a mother. Mom , I cannot live without you. I love you so much!
That't about the person I love best . How do you think about my mother? Write to me soon , please.
Best wishes,
Linh

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