Time : 2016-03-06 20:31:08
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Dear Alice,

I was very happy when reading your letter. How are you? I'm very fine. I hope that everyone is well.

Your letter was about your mother. You mother is very beautiful and kind. I want to meet her someday. If somebody asks me: " Who do you love most?”, Sure, I will answer the person I love most in my life is my mom, too.

My mother isn't beautiful but I love her so much. Her name is Lan Huong. I call her mommy. She is forty-three years old. She’s got a round face. Her hair is long and black. She has suntanned skin and black eyes. She is short and rather fat. But my mother is very kind and friendly like your mother. She is a teacher at a primary school. She loves her job, her colleagues and her students so much. My mother gave birth to me, brings me up, teaches me, does all things if I want.

My mother is very kind and friendly to all people. She is always ready to help all people. She is very outspoken in everything. But, many people loved her because they know my mother is never deceitful. Besides, she is also humorous and understand me well. Whenever I feel bored , she makes me happier by telling many funny stories as your mother does. When before I sleep, she often tells me a fairy tale. When I learn late at night, my mother is always tells me: " You should sleep now. Don't go to sleep late because It is a bad habit. I hope you are never sick, lovely daughter." Every evening, I alway receive mother's warning such as brush my teeth, don't go to bed late, don't watch TV. I am very happy because I have a kind mother.

When I have some 10 points and some teacher's praise, my mother give me some cakes, candies. But I love her kisses most. When my mother kisses me, I am very happy. But she’s also very strict, especially when I make mistakes. When I was five years old, I broke a flower vase at my house's uncle because I ran and touched it. My mother didn’t punish me. She seriously advised: " You should do the right thing, daughter!" Finally, I went to my uncle's home and said him: " I'm sorry, sir." After that, I always remember my mother's warning.

That’s my mom – the person I love most in my life. I love her so much, forever. I hope she will live with me forever. Finally, I want to say: "I love you, Mommy."



Oh, it's 10:00 p.m. I'm going to go to brush my teeth and go to bed. Bye bye, Alice.

Write to me soon!

Best regards,

Nhimchelsea05

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Alice,

I was very happy when reading your letter. How are you? I'm very fine. I hope that everyone is well.

Your letter was about your mother. You mother is very beautiful and kind. I want to meet her someday. If somebody asks me: " Who do you love most?”, Sure, I will answer the person I love most in my life is my mom, too.

My mother isn't beautiful but I love her so much. Her name is Lan Huong. I call her mommy. She is forty-three years old. She’s got a round face. Her hair is long and black. She has suntanned skin and black eyes. She is short and rather fat. But my mother is very kind and friendly like your mother. She is a teacher at a primary school. She loves her job, her colleagues and her students so much. My mother gave birth to me, brings me up, teaches me, does all things if I want.

My mother is very kind and friendly to all people. She is always ready to help all people. She is very outspoken in everything. But, many people loved love her because they know my mother is never deceitful. Besides, she is also humorous and understand me well. Whenever I feel bored , she makes me happier by telling many funny stories as your mother does. When before I sleep, she often tells me a fairy tale. When I learn late at night, my mother is always tells me: " You should sleep now. Don't go to sleep late because It is a bad habit. I hope you are never sick, my lovely daughter." Every evening, I alway receive mother's warning such as brush my teeth, don't go to bed late, don't watch TV. I am very happy because I have a kind mother.

When I have some 10 points get good marks and some teacher's praise, my mother gives me some cakes, candies. But I love her kisses most. When my mother kisses me, I am very happy. But she’s also very strict, especially when I make mistakes. When I was five years old, I broke a flower vase at my house's uncle because I ran and touched it. My mother didn’t punish me. She seriously advised: " You should do the right thing, daughter!" Finally, I went to my uncle's home and said him: " I'm sorry, sir." After that, I always remember my mother's warning.

That’s my mom – the person I love most in my life. I love her so much, forever. I hope she will live with me forever. Finally, I want to say: "I love you, Mommy."



Oh, it's 10:00 p.m. I'm going to go to brush my teeth and go to bed. Bye bye, Alice.

Write to me soon!

Best regards,

Nhimchelsea05

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