Time : 2016-03-03 14:05:53
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Dear Alice,



I am fine, thank you very much. If someone asks me: “Who do you love most?" I will ready to answer that: "I love my mom most."

Maybe you know that my mom is Lan and she's thirty-seven years old. Although my mom is in her thirty, but she still looks very beautiful. She's tall and thin with beautiful long black hair. She’s got an oval face, full lips and big black eyes. When she smiles, her white and beautiful teeth are reveal. This makes her even more beautiful.

My mom is very kind and friendly. She is always ready to help her friends and neighbors. She speaks very bonny. Thanks to this, everyone very loves her.

My mother takes care of me considerately whenever I am sick.

She’s also very strict, especially when I make mistakes. One day I cleaned the house. I broken the bowl. When my mom went home, she asked me:" Who is broke the bowl? Do you know?" I couldn't answer her. My mother didn’t punish me but seriously advised me to do the right thing. Finally, I told her the truth and said sorry.

This is my mom, the person I love most.



Write to me soon!^_^



Best regards,



Nhi

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Alice,

I am fine, thank you very much. If someone asks me: “Who do you love most?" I will ready to answer that: "I love my mom most."

Maybe you know that my mom's name is Lan and she's thirty-seven years old. Although my mom is in her thirties, but she still looks very beautiful. She's tall and thin with beautiful long black hair. She’s got an oval face, full lips and big black eyes. When she smiles, her white and beautiful teeth are revealed. This makes her even more beautiful.

My mom is very kind and friendly. She is always ready to help her friends and neighbors. She speaks very bonny (chưa rõ nghĩa). Thanks to this, everyone very loves her a lot.

My mother takes care of me considerately whenever I am sick.

She’s also very strict, especially when I make mistakes. One day I cleaned the house. I broken the a bowl. When my mom went home, she asked me:" Who is broke the bowl? Do you know?" I couldn't answer her. My mother didn’t punish me but seriously advised me to do the right thing. Finally, I told her the truth and said sorry.

This is my mom, the person I love most.



Write to me soon!^_^



Best regards,



Nhi

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