Time : 2020-03-24 23:56:04
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Kyle,

I am glad to see your letter and hope that you and your family are going well. The first, I would like to thank you for sharing your happiness with me. It is great to know that your graduate school application has been accepted by Wuhan University. You are so fantastic. I am so proud of you.

Honestly, I would like to say thank you for trusting me. I am always willing to help you with anything in my capacity. Therefore, I will translate for you all 7 pages into Chinese. I am sure they will arrive 2 days earlier than the date you wrote in the letter.

Perhaps, your dream will come true, I always believe that everything will be fine with a brilliant student like you. You should keep you healthy and I hope that you will study well and you remember that I am happy to help you.

Yours,
Lee

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Kyle,

I am glad to see your letter and hope that you and your family are going well. The first (dùng từ nối), I would like to thank you for sharing your happiness with me. It is great to know that your graduate school application has been accepted by Wuhan University. You are so fantastic. I am so proud of you.

Honestly, I would like to say thank you for trusting me. I am always willing to help you with anything translation in my capacity. Therefore, I will translate for you all 7 pages into Chinese. I am sure they will arrive 2 days earlier than December 10th the date you wrote in the letter. bạn nên bổ sung chi tiết Đánh giá tầm quan trọng của tài liệu này: nó quyết định việc được đi học thạc sĩ ở đại học Vũ Hán để hoàn thiện bài viết hơn.


Perhaps, your dream will come true, I always believe that everything will be fine with a brilliant student like you. You should keep you healthy and I hope that you will study well and you remember that I am happy to help you.

Yours,
Lee

 

Bạn giải quyết vấn đề khá ổn, song có 1 số lỗi về từ nối và dùng từ bạn nên cẩn trọng hơn. Hơn nữa, bạn cũng nên bổ sung 1 số chi tiết phản hồi để bài viết hoàn thiện hơn như sau: Quan điểm của bạn đối với việc nhờ công cụ hỗ trợ dịch của google: chỉ để tham khảo chứ bản dịch từ google dịch thường dịch word by word và không làm toát ý dịch được