Time : 2020-03-20 08:29:01
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Kyle,

Hope you and your family are doing well. I'm so glad to hear that you have passed the application round for university entrance exam. You really learned hard and I think you are completely deserve for it.
For your request, I have a glance at your documents you sent. It's not quite complicated but have some new major words so I need to look up dictionary. Anyway, I will try to translate and send to you before 10th December. Hope I can help you something that you can make your dream come true.
As you will study in Chinese, I strong recommend you to study Chinese because Chinese people do not use English very well so you might find difficulties to communicate with them. Trying to use this free time to learn a bit and maybe next time, we will exchange emails by Chinese not English anymore.
Take care and keep in touch!
Best regards
Lee

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Kyle,

Hope you and your family are doing well. I'm so glad to hear that you have passed the application round for university entrance exam of Wuhan University in China. You really learned hard and I think you are không dùng tobe trước động từ thường completely deserve for it.
For your request, I have a glance at your documents you sent. It's dùng đại từ thay thế cho danh từ số nhiều documents và chia động từ theo danh từ đó not quite complicated but have some new major words so I need to look up dictionary. Anyway, I will try to translate and send them to you before 10th December. Hope I can help you something that you can make your dream come true with the translated documents.
As you will study in Chinese, I strongly (dùng trạng từ trước động từ thường) recommend you to study Chinese because Chinese people do not use English very well so you might find difficulties to communicate with them. Trying to use this free time to learn a bit and maybe next time, we will exchange emails by Chinese not English anymore.ý này không liên quan đến nội dung phản hồi chính
Take care and keep in touch!
Best regards,
Lee

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Điểm: 5.5