Time : 2020-03-17 21:39:35
Điểm: 6/10
Dear Jame Grant,
I am delighted when hearing that you have recently graduated from the Bradford Union School. Hence, this is a highlight point in your life and I think that terrific party should be hold rationally. This celebration should get enough guests but should minimize affects to surrounding residents.
As you known, I have a small baby and night sleep is incredibly imperative with him. Loud conversation can make him wake up and interrupt our sleep. Consequently, our work the day after will not be smooth with a great deal of trouble. For the sake of that reason, I recommend that you move your barbecue party as well as music gala to morning and it will end before night. All commotion just appears in all day in the time my baby and we are not at home.
It is cheerful if you can get other measures for this problem. If needed, you can meet me at 8 pm tomorrow in my home and we will discuss to have the best ideas. Look forward to seeing you soon.
Kind regards,
Ms Kelly.

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Dear Jame Grant,
I am delighted when hearing that you have recently graduated from the Bradford Union School. Hence, this is a highlight point in your life and I think that terrific dùng tính từ miêu tả chưa đúng party should be hold dùng PII trong câu bị động rationally. This celebration should get enough guests but should minimize affects to surrounding residents. không liên quan đến nội dung của bài
As you known dùng hiện tại đơn, I have a small baby and night sleep is incredibly imperative with him. Loud conversation can make him wake up and interrupt our sleep. Consequently, our work the day after will not be smooth with a great deal of trouble. For the sake of that reason, I recommend that you move your barbecue party as well as music gala to morning and it will end before night. All commotion just appears in all day in the time my baby and we are not at home. nên gợi ý tổ chức sớm hơn và kết thúc sớm, có thể cụ thể thời gian thì hợp lý hơn thay vì đổi ngày
It is cheerful if you can get other measures for this problem. If needed, you can meet me at 8 pm tomorrow in my home at my house and we will discuss to have the best ideas. Look forward to seeing you soon.
Kind regards,
Ms Kelly.

 

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