Time : 2021-10-19 23:34:49
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Dear Sally,

I am glad to receive your letter. Thank you for taking care of my health. I am fine and my job is still good. In fact, we had a great time together last summer. I am really happy, it was wonderful.

As you know, I have a passion for the violin and I usually play it every day. By the way, I want to share a good news with you. I have just got a part-time job at the Blue restaurant for several months. I often play the violin at the restaurant every night. This job is so wonderful and the salary is quite good, so I can pay for my school fees and living costs.

About my shirts and books, indeed, I really want to meet you. However, my schedule is full so I am afraid I cannot see you right now. I am sorry. Thus, if you do not mind, you can send them to me via the post office. All the postage, I will send them to you later.

Thank you for writing to me. However, I am sorry to have refused your request to meet. I promise you that I will definitely arrange a time to see you in the near future. Don't overwork yourself and make sure you get enough rest, Sally.

Yours,
Jo

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Dear Sally,

I am glad to receive your letter. Thank you for taking care of my health. I am fine and my job is still good. In fact, we had a great time together last summer. I am really happy, it was wonderful.

As you know, I have a passion for the violin and I usually play it every day. By the way, I want to share a good news with you. I have just got a part-time job at the Blue restaurant for several months. I often play the violin at the restaurant every night. This job is so wonderful and the salary is quite good, so I can pay for my school fees and living costs.

About my shirts and books, indeed, I really want to meet you. However, my schedule is full so I am afraid I cannot see you right now. I am sorry. Thus, if you do not mind, you can send them chưa nhắc đến danh từ ở câu trước nên không dùng đại từ thay thế to me via the post office. All the postage dùng danh từ sau send, không dùng them, I will send them to you later.

Thank you for writing to me. However, I am sorry to have refused your request to meet. I promise you that I will definitely arrange a time to see you in the near future. Don't overwork yourself and make sure you get enough rest, Sally.

Yours,
Jo

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