Time : 2021-09-30 17:33:59
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Jacky,

I am so sorry to hear of your accident. I am also looking forward to our evening out as well; however; it is much more essential that you follow your doctor's advice to make the best recovery.

I am happy to know that you invited Shirley to go with me and she agreed. It's been a while since I last met her; therefore; this is a valuable opportunity for both of us to hang out with each other. I still remember that when we were in high school, Shirley was the one who loved watching plays most and I do believe that this play will satisfy her.

I am also glad to know that her timetable which you let me know is suitable for me. I will contact her later to confirm the time and the location again. Thank you for your thoughtfulness.

I would like to come over to your house after the play with Shirley so that all of us can chat as well as recall all the memories at high school together. It's been a long time since we last gathered together. I will buy some fruits and snacks and you don't have to make any preparations.

I hope you will have a good rest and recover soon. I am looking forward to seeing you and Shirley as well.

All the best,

Kate

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Jacky,

I am so sorry to hear of about your accident. I am also looking forward to our evening out as well; however; it is much more essential that you follow your doctor's advice to make the best recovery is much more essential (diễn đạt lại, dùng mệnh đề danh ngữ làm chủ ngữ không dùng mệnh đề đó sau tính từ.

I am happy to know that you invited Shirley to go with me and she agreed. It's been a while since I last met her; therefore; this is a valuable opportunity for both of us to hang out with each other. I still remember that when we were in at high school, Shirley was the one who loved watching plays most and I do believe that this play will satisfy her.

I am also glad to know that her timetable which you let me know is suitable for me. I will contact her later to confirm the time and the location again. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. nên phản hồi về lịch trình, thời gian của cô ấy cụ thể

I would like to come over to your house after the play with Shirley so that all of us can chat as well as recall all the memories at high school together. It's been a long time since we last gathered together. I will buy some fruits and snacks and you don't have to make any preparations.không cần thiết

I hope you will have a good rest and recover soon. I am looking forward to seeing you and Shirley as well.

All the best,

Kate

Bạn viết bài cơ bản ổn về ý và nội dung, các nội dung, song bạn cần cô động ý hơn, chú ý diễn đạt nhiều hơn. Cố gắng hơn nhé.

Điểm: 5.5