Time : 2021-10-05 11:02:34
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Jacky,
I am sorry to hear that you had a serious accident with your bicycle. And thank you for asking Shirley to go to the theater with me.
I am so sad to know that due to the accident your ankle was broken and you are not permitted to walk now. This means that the accident was so terrible. Moreover, we cannot go to the theater together although we made that plan a long time ago and were looking forward to the play. But I understand that your health is the most important thing now so you should stay at home and take rest. Thus, you can get recovered soon. I am sure that we will have many chances to hang out in the future
I really appreciate that you asked Shirley so that I will have a company to go with me. Moreover, I can have time for a drink with her in the bar. I would love to go with her and feel excited about meeting her after a long time. You are such a thoughtful person.
I promise you that I will tell you everything about the evening, especially the play. We will take many photos and shoot some videos for you. I really hope that you will get well soon and I will come to visit you as soon as I can.
Best wishes,
Kate

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Dear Jacky,
I am sorry to hear that you had a serious accident with your bicycle. And thank you for asking Shirley to go to the theater with me.
I am so sad to know that due to the accident your ankle was broken and you are not permitted to walk now. This means that the accident was so terrible thừa ý. Moreover, we cannot go to the theater together although we made that plan a long time ago and were looking forward to the play. But I understand that your health is the most important thing now so you should stay at home and take a rest. Thus, you can get recovered soon. I am sure that we will have many chances to hang out in the future
I really appreciate that you asked Shirley so that I will have a company to go with me. Moreover, I can have time for a drink with her in the bar. I would love to go with her and feel excited about meeting her after a long time. You are such a thoughtful person. cần phản hồi về việc đưa đón con trai cô ấy và sự luyện tập cho ga la môn bơi lội
I promise you that I will tell you everything about the evening, especially the play. We will take many photos and shoot some videos for you. I really hope that you will get well soon and I will come to visit you as soon as I can.
Best wishes,
Kate

Nhìn chung, bạn giải quyết vấn đề và phản hồi tương đối ổn, song vẫn chưa hoàn thiện nội dung. Cố gắng hơn nhé.