Time : 2021-08-27 23:01:09
Điểm: 6/10
Dear Mr. Jack Dylan,

I would like to confirm that I received your email apologizing for not showing up for our appointment on Saturday. To be honest, I was pretty unpleasant at first because I did not get any message in advance of your absence. But through your email, I could understand to some degree and sympathize with unavoidable cases of a medical emergency as a doctor.

Moreover, I appreciate that you had deference for your patients' time. In fact, I had to adjust a little bit in my schedule on that day but not affected me a whole lot. So I want to say these things so that you do not feel necessarily guilty about this problem.

Finally, thank you for your willingness to help me at any time I need. And I hope that I can get to see you soon for our next appointment on coming Thursday.

Yours faithfully,
Mr. Anders

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Dear Mr. Jack Dylan,

I would like to confirm that I received your email apologizing for not showing up for our appointment on Saturday. To be honest, I was pretty unpleasant at first because I did not get any message in advance để cuối câu of your absence. But through your email, I could understand your emergency situation to some degree and sympathize with unavoidable cases of a medical emergency as a doctor.

Moreover, I appreciate that you had deference for your patients' time. In fact, I had to adjust a little bit thiếu danh từ in my schedule on that day but not affected me a whole lot dùng mệnh đề sau but. So I want to say these things so that you do not feel necessarily guilty about this problem.

Finally, thank you for your willingness to help me at any time I need. And I hope that I can get to see you soon for our next appointment on coming Thursday.  cần phản hồi rõ ràng thời gian hẹn

Yours faithfully,
Mr. Anders

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Điểm: 6.5