Time : 2021-08-24 23:42:13
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Ms. Mary Jones,

I would like to thank you for your compliments. To be honest, it is a great pleasure to receive this compliment. It is truly a great encouragement for me to continue working better.

In fact, you chose me to help you achieve your ideas, and I only advised you on how to decorate your store to attract customers from afar. Moreover, I know that you are very busy with the grand opening. Therefore, I suggested you buy the software program to help you have a professional sales process and serve customers in the fastest and most timely manner. It is the responsibility of the professional consultant to my client.

Again, I would like to express my gratitude for your compliments. I hope to have more opportunities to cooperate and look forward to a continuing relationship which will be profitable to all. Wish everything you do be successful and wish your business will have many advantages.

Best regards,
Ms. Lee

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Dear Ms. Mary Jones,

I would like to thank you for your compliments on ...(khen ngợi cái gì). To be honest, it is a great pleasure to receive this compliment these compliments (bạn dùng danh từ số nhiều ở câu trước). It is truly a great encouragement for me to continue working better.

In fact, you chose me to help you achieve make your ideas come true, and I only advised you on how to decorate and color your store to attract customers from afar. Moreover, I know that you are very busy with the grand opening. Therefore, I suggested you buy the software program to help you have a professional sales process and serve customers in the fastest way and the most timely manner. It is the responsibility of the professional consultant to my client.

Again, I would like to express my gratitude for your compliments. I hope to have more opportunities to cooperate and look forward to a continuing relationship which will be profitable to all. I Wish everything you do be chia động từ và lùi thì trong câu ao ước successful and wish your business will have many advantages.

Best regards,
Ms. Lee

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Điểm: 7.5