Time : 2021-08-17 23:29:14
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Robin Singh,

I am so glad to receive your letter which shows your interest in my Japanese course. Besides, I would like to thank Mr. Jonathon Kyle for introducing my friend as a Japanese teacher and thank you for believing in me. Therefore, I hope that in a short period of time I can partially meet your expectations.

In fact, I have opened to teach Japanese through 2 forms which are online courses and offline courses. Offline courses are made up of 12 weeks. There are 2 lessons a week and each lesson is 90 minutes. This course will start on September 1 and end on November 1. About offline courses time, my class has 3 shifts. The first shift is from 8:30 to 10:10, the second begins at 10:30 and ends at 11:10 and the last shift is 19:00 to 20:30. In this course, you will learn a lot of topics related to Japanese daily life and work.

Offline courses will be learned via Skype application for students who are far away. This course will have flexible hours to meet the needs of learners. This class is for those who want to learn communication from scratch. In this course, I will teach basic knowledge such as pronunciation, grammar, communication and speaking practice.

I hope that you have peace of mind and completely believe in my knowledge and enthusiasm in order that I will help you achieve the goals of fluent Japanese communication. If you need any other information about the course, do not be hesitant to contact me.

Best regards,
Mr. Haruki

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Robin Singh,

I am so glad to receive your letter which shows your interest in my Japanese course. Besides, I would like to thank Mr. Jonathon Kyle for introducing my friend as a Japanese teacher me to you and thank you for believing in me. Therefore, I hope that in a short period of time I can partially meet your expectations.

In fact, I have opened thiếu tân ngữ sau open to teach Japanese through 2 forms which are online courses and offline courses. Offline courses are made up of 12 weeks. There are 2 lessons a week and each lesson is 90 minutes. This course will start on September 1 and end on November 1. About offline courses danh từ số ít trước danh từ khác time, my class has 3 shifts. The first shift is from 8:30 to 10:10, the second begins at 10:30 and ends at 11:10 and the last shift is 19:00 to 20:30. In this course, you will learn a lot of topics related to Japanese daily life and work.

Offline courses will be learned via Skype application offline sao lại học qua ứng dụng? for students who are far away. This course will have flexible hours to meet the needs of learners. This class is for those who want to learn communication from scratch. In this course, I will teach basic knowledge such as pronunciation, grammar, communication and speaking practice.

I hope that you have peace of mind and completely believe in my knowledge and enthusiasm in order that I will help you achieve the goals of fluent Japanese communication. If you need any other information about the course, do not be hesitant to contact me.

Best regards,
Mr. Haruki

Bạn đang viết bài hơi chệch hướng phản hồi sang giới thiệu khóa học của bạn nhiều hơn là phản hồi thư đề bài về việc nhờ dạy tiếng Nhật. Nội dung giới thiệu này, bạn có thể tóm tắt ngắn gọn hơn và hỏi anh ấy khóa học nào phù hợp và xác nhận sớm để bắt đầu học. Hơn nữa, cần hoàn thiện 1 số ý như sau:

- Đánh giá cao sự đam mê học hỏi tiếng Nhật của anh ấy, mục đích học tiếng Nhật (tìm kiếm cơ hội việc làm quốc tế, đặc biệt là ở Nhật Bản và giao tiếp với những người bạn bản ngữ)

- Đồng ý giảng dạy cho anh ấy, đề cập đến ngày học, việc phải làm để bắt đầu học

- Hy vọng anh ấy sẽ học tập tốt và giao tiếp thành thạo tiếng Nhật sau khóa học