Time : 2021-07-29 16:19:13
Điểm: 5/10
Dear John Carlson,


I am the the plan developer a shopping centre on the Boundary Road. I apologize to you and the residents of Boundary Road for not specifically informing residents about this plan before.


I looked around and found the Boundary Road to be a potential place to build a shopping centre. The construction of a shopping center will be more convenient for the surrounding residents to buy necessary items.


I know that our construction of a shopping center will reduce the tranquility of the Boundary Road and a lot of residents will be not at all happy about it. But please don't worry, I guarantee this will help everyone in the future.


According to the construction plan, a shopping centre is expected to be started in January next year on a big size, I will send information such as the size of the centre, estimated construction time,... to the residents in the next few days. As for a car park, you don't worry, in my plan there is the construction of a car park.


I thank you very much for letting me know the opinions and needs of the residents of the Boundary Road for the shopping center construction plan.


Yours faithfully,


Pham Nhi

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear John Carlson,


I am the the plan developer of a the (dùng mạo từ xác định chỉ đối tượng cụ thể) shopping centre on the Boundary Road. I apologize to you and the residents of Boundary Road for not specifically informing residents about this plan before nội dung này không phù hợp .


I looked around and found the Boundary Road to be a potential place to build a shopping centre. The construction of a the shopping center will be more convenient for the surrounding residents to buy necessary items.


I know that our construction of a the shopping center will reduce the tranquility of the Boundary Road and a lot of residents will be not at all happy about it. But please don't worry, I guarantee this will help everyone in the future đảm bảo lợi ích như thế nào, cần làm rõ.


According to the construction plan, a the shopping centre is expected to be started thể chủ động in January next year on a big size, I will send information such as the size of the centre, estimated construction time,... to the residents in the next few days. As for a car park, you don't worry, in my plan there is the construction of a car park dùng cấu trúc there is + a/an + danh từ số ít chứ không dùng mạo từ the.


I thank you very much for letting me know the opinions and needs of the residents of the Boundary Road for the shopping center construction plan.


Yours faithfully,


Pham Nhi

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