Time : 2021-07-31 09:52:29
Điểm: 5/10
Dear John Carlson,




Thank you for letting us know what your thoughts are. I am the plan developer of the plan to build a shopping centre that is near your home where you are living. I have read your letter and I know how you feel about this. Do not be concerned, before proceeding with the construction, we will notify the construction department to reduce the noise as much as possible. Furthermore, we also have a waste treatment unit before sending waste to the outside environment, so you do not need to concern too much about noise pollution and air pollution in the residential areas.



As you have asked about the plan, I would like to share with you that we are going to start the construction on August 23rd of this year (August 23rd, 2021). As expected, the construction process can be rather long because of the large scale of the construction. It will be completed by May 2nd, 2023, as we have calculated, so the period may be longer or shorter depending on the speed of construction. We will also try to build the construction as quickly as possible for the benefit of the residents who are living in this area. Also, if you want to check more info about the plan of building this centre, you can go to the city centre(It is just about 1,3 kilometres from the Boundary Road where you are living), and look at the big bulletin board about upcoming construction - it is opposite the BHD Star Cineplex Cinema and it is where the construction will be built.



About providing a car park for people in this area, we think we might put off for a while because the building that is being constructed is immensely enormous and we do not have too many financial resources. However, after careful consideration, we are pleased to announce that we have decided that after we finish building the shopping centre, we will plan about building a car park for the residents in your area. After that, we will inform you and the residents in your area about the plan.



We hope the above information answers your concerns. If you would like any further information, please don’t hesitate to contact me.



Best regards




Raiyan Tanvir

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear John Carlson,

Thank you for letting us know what your thoughts are viết ý cám ơn sự quan tâm tới dự án này. I am the plan developer of the plan to build a shopping centre that is near your home where you are living home đã bao gồm ý này rồi. I have read your letter and I know how you feel about this. Do not be concerned, before proceeding with the construction, we will notify the construction department to reduce the noise as much as possible. Furthermore, we also have a waste treatment unit before sending waste to the outside environment, so you do not need to concern too much about noise pollution and air pollution in the residential areas.cần bày tỏ quan điểm của bạn với những ý kiến của John về sự yên bình vốn có của vùng này chứ không phải về sự ô nhiễm khi xây dựng

As you have asked about the plan, I would like to share with you that we are going to start the construction on August 23rd of this year (August 23rd, 2021). As expected, the construction process can be rather long because of the large scale of the construction. It will be completed by May 2nd, 2023, as we have calculated planned, so the period may be longer or shorter depending on the speed of construction không cần ý chỉ kết quả này. We will also try to build the construction as quickly as possible for the benefit of the residents who are living in this area. Also, if you want to check more info about the plan of building this centre, you can go to the city centre(It is just about 1,3 kilometres from the Boundary Road where you are living), and look at the big bulletin board about upcoming construction - it is opposite the BHD Star Cineplex Cinema and it is where the construction will be built.John đang hỏi về chi tiết của dự án, bạn có thể trả lời trong thư này chứ không bảo đi đến đâu đó để tìm hiểu

About providing a car park for people in this area, we think we might put off for a while because the building that is being constructed is immensely enormous and we do not have too many financial resources. However, after careful consideration, we are pleased to announce that we have decided that after we finish building the shopping centre, we will plan about building a car park for the residents in your area. After that, we will inform you and the residents in your area about the plan.  đoạn này mâu thuẫn ý, trên nói không xây bãi đỗ xe, dưới lại đề cập đến việc xây nó

We hope the above information answers your concerns makes you satisfied. If you would like to know any further information, please don’t không viết tắt trong thư formal hesitate to contact me.

Best regards,

Raiyan Tanvir

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