Time : 2021-07-17 23:59:58
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Mr.Pooja Gupta,

I heard that you had an accident on the way to pick your friends up, and I hope that you are unhurt due to this one. I would say that I understand and completely empathize with what you went through. This is an unexpected accident and the fact that the broken car is unavoidable. What matters is that you are still safe after all.

Simultaneously, I am truly grateful for your trust in our company's services. On top of that, thank you for such featured compliments to our company. In fact, we still have many faults but always make an effort to improve the quality of service so as to offer our customers the best.

Therefore, you do not need to worry about this problem because we head toward the target that every customer will get the best experience, obviously including unwanted incidents like that. So we will immediately arrange for you another car as soon as possible in order not to have an effect on your work.

Finally, I want to say thanks so much for using our service once again and I hope that we have a chance to provide you with our service in the future.

Yours faithfully,
Tom Hiddleston
The manager of the company

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Mr.Pooja Gupta,

I heard I am sorry to hear (bày tỏ cảm xúc với việc đó) that you had an accident on the way to pick your friends up, and I hope that you are unhurt due to this one. I would say that I understand and completely empathize with what you went through. This is an unexpected accident and the fact that the broken car is unavoidable câu fragment. What matters is that you are still safe after all.diễn đạt để làm rõ ý

Simultaneously, I am truly grateful for your trust in our company's services. On top of that, thank you for such featured compliments to our company. In fact, we still have many faults but always make an effort to improve the quality of service so as to offer our customers the best services.

Therefore, you do not need to worry about this problem because we head toward the target that every customer will get the best experience, obviously including unwanted incidents like that nguyên nhân chưa thuyết phục. So we will immediately arrange for you để cuối câu another car as soon as possible in order not to have an effect on your work.

Finally, I want to say express our thanks so much for using our service once again and I hope that we have a more chances to provide you with our service in the future.

Yours faithfully,
Tom Hiddleston
The manager of the company

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Điểm: 5.5