Time : 2020-12-11 23:23:45
Điểm: 9/10
Dear Sameed Qureshi,

First of all, I am glad to receive your letter that you have reported me the problem timely. Besides, I am extremely sorry to hear that you had to be hospitalized due to dehydration caused by the faulty faucet at the ground.

In fact, the problem of lacking water during the training sessions of the students is totally unacceptable. More particular, your football team is making preparations for the upcoming competition against FC College while the training is both mentally and physically hard. For this reason, it has not only exerted a negative influence on your football team’s progress but also badly affected your health conditions, especially in the training sessions for this important sporting event to come. As a result, in order to timely solve this problem, I have immediately requested the technical worker to come and fix it on the spot. After that, I have myself checked the condition of the faucet to guarantee that the new faucet is in good working condition.

Once again, I heartedly apologize for the inconvenience that your friends and you have suffered during the training time and I do hope that you will let me know about every faulty equipment and any troubles that you will meet. Additionally, I believe that everything will go well and your football team will calmly and confidently win over FC College in the upcoming competition.

Best wishes,
Đ B H – the college president

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Sameed Qureshi,

First of all, I am glad to receive your letter that you have reported me the problem timely. Besides, I am extremely sorry to hear that you had to be hospitalized due to dehydration caused by the faulty faucet at the ground.

In fact, the problem of lacking water during the training sessions of the students is totally unacceptable. More particular dùng trạng từ, your football team is making preparations for the upcoming competition against FC College while the training is both mentally and physically hard. For this reason, it has not only exerted a negative influence on your football team’s progress but also badly affected your health conditions, especially in the training sessions for this important sporting event to come (đã có từ this rồi). As a result, in order to timely solve this problem, I have immediately requested the technical worker to come and fix it on the spot. After that, I have myself checked the condition of the faucet to guarantee that the new faucet is in good working condition.

Once again, I heartedly apologize for the inconvenience that your friends and you have suffered during the training time and I do hope that you will let me know about every faulty equipment and any troubles that you will can (chỉ sự việc có thể xảy ra) meet. Additionally, I believe that everything will go well and your football team will calmly and confidently win over FC College in the upcoming competition.

Best wishes,
Đ B H – the college president

 

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