Time : 2020-12-15 21:38:58
Điểm: 8/10
Dear Ms. Sameed Quershi,

I am writing to apologize to you for what happened to you and your team while training in our football field. To be honest, I really would like to know whether your health is now. I hope that your health is still better.

In fact, after reading your complaint letter, I fully understand your feeling now, and I admit that this mistake is belong to me. Therefore, I will call a technical worker to check immediately. If the faucet is broken, I will replace it with a new one and I assure you that you will have water to drink in order that your workouts will not be completely exhausted due to dehydration. Besides, I have just signed a contract with the service and repair center. Thus, from now on, if any devices are broken, you only need to call 18001068 workers are present immediately, they will serve you 24/7, and you do not need to pay any fees.

Once again, I deeply apologize for the inconvenience that your friends and you have suffered over the past time. I am sure that this will never happen again. I wish your team a successful match and your team would win the prize.

Best regards,
Donna Roth(the college president)

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Ms. Sameed Quershi,

I am writing to apologize to you for what happened to you and your team while training in our football field. To be honest, I really would like to know whether your health is now. I hope that your health is still better.

In fact, after reading your complaint letter, I fully understand your feeling now, and I admit that this mistake is belong to không dùng tobe trước động từ thường me. Therefore, I will call a technical worker to check immediately. If the faucet is broken, I will replace it with a new one and I assure you that you will have water to drink in order that your workouts will not be completely exhausted due to dehydration. Besides, I have just signed a contract with the service and repair center. Thus, from now on, if any devices are broken, you only need to call 18001068 nên tách ý để tránh quá nhiều ý trong câu, bạn có thể dùng từ then để liệt kê workers are present immediately, they will serve you 24/7, and you do not need to pay any fees.

Once again, I deeply apologize for the inconvenience that your friends and you have suffered over the past time. I am sure that this will never happen again. I wish your team would have (nên chú ý tương quan cấu trúc khi liệt kê với and) a successful match and your team would win the prize.

Best regards,
Donna Roth(the college president)

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Điểm: 8.5