Time : 2020-11-28 21:55:28
Điểm: 8/10
Dear Martin Craig,

I am very glad to receive your warm letter. Hope that you had a great time in Switzerland with such Europe's nice weather these days. Also, it is very kind of you when remembering to buy me a foreign gift before you returned home from your trip.

To be honest, I feel really surprised and excited to hear that it was a wristwatch made by Tissot, one of the most reputable branches in the world. Your description of it to have platinum case along with silver strap awakes my interest in how precious it must be. I am very eager to see it immediately.

Thank you very much for a stunning present. You are such a dedicated person to remember that I sweat a lot in the summer. I will try to protect this wristwatch carefully for how meaningful it is to me.

For some reasons, you should deliver it to my office's address which is attached below this letter. I am very grateful to you for once again. Please send my best wishes to the whole of your family.

Love,
Niro

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Dear Martin Craig,

I am very glad to receive your warm letter. Hope that you had a great time in Switzerland with such Europe's nice weather these days. Also, it is very kind of you when remembering to buy me a foreign gift before you returned home from your trip. 

To be honest, I feel really surprised and excited to hear that it was a wristwatch made by Tissot, one of the most reputable branches in the world. Your description of it to have platinum case along with silver strap awakes my interest in how precious it must be?. I am very eager to see it immediately.

Thank you very much for a stunning present. You are such a dedicated person to remember that I sweat a lot in the summer. I will try to protect this wristwatch carefully for how meaningful it is to me. nên dùng mệnh đề chỉ nguyên nhân chứ không nên dùng từ hỏi how + adj

For some reasons, you should deliver it to my office's address which is attached below in this letter. I am very grateful to you for once again. Please send my best wishes to the whole of your family.

Love,
Niro

 

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Điểm: 8.5