Time : 2020-09-14 21:04:02
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Andy,

I am glad to hear that you are doing well these days. I would like to thank you for inviting me to your son's birthday. It is indeed a pleasure of me.

From the schedule of the party I can tell that the birthday has been carefully prepared and I am sure it will be a memorable birthday of your son with lots of joy and memories to be recalled.

I am on cloud nine when I know this! Playing with him has always been a pleasure for me and I'm glad that he loves my funny doodles. He is such a good and caring kid and I am looking forward to meeting and and having some fun with him tomorrow. Hope to see your family tomorrow and have a wonderful night together.

Your sincerely,

Traverse

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Dear Andy,

I am glad to hear that you are doing well these days. I would like to thank you for inviting me to your son's birthday. It is indeed a pleasure of me.

From According to the schedule of the party, I can tell that the birthday has been carefully prepared and I am sure it will be a memorable birthday of your son with lots of joy danh từ số nhiều and memories to be recalled.dùng mệnh đề quan hệ hoặc rút gọn PII

I am on cloud nine when I know this biết điều gì?! Playing with him has always been a pleasure for me and I'm không viết tắt trong thư formal glad that he loves my funny doodles. He is such a good and caring kid and I am looking forward to meeting and and having some fun with him tomorrow cụ thể ngày sinh nhật. Hope to see your family tomorrow and have a wonderful night together.

Your sincerely,

Traverse

Nhìn chung, bạn triển khai ý khá rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, các chi tiết trong bài, bạn lại phản hồi chung chung. Đoạn 2, khi phản hồi về kế hoạch, bạn nên đề cập đến kế hoạch cụ thể theo triển khai ý của bạn, sau đó đưa ra sự phản hồi rõ ràng. Đoạn 3, thông tin cụ thể để phản hồi về sự yêu thích tranh của bạn chưa có. Hãy làm rõ các chi tiết đó nhé.