Time : 2020-09-07 01:44:55
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Andy Moore,

First of all, I am really thankful to you for your letter full of the honest compliments that you gave me. It was my great pleasure and responsibility when having a chance to devote myself to our company. I am very happy to know that our annual executive conference held last week was sucessful beyond expectations. This was considered as a wonderful achievement of my team.

In fact, the idea taking the name “Stronger as a team” came to me quite accidentally while I was watching a reality gameshow on TV. I think that it really fits the current situation happening in our company. Despite of any difficulties and barriers, all of we need to do is uniting to jointly promote its development as far as possible. That is not only the meaning of our theme but also the message I would like to widely spread among everyone working in our branch.

Furthermore, it can be denied that this outstanding conference is the deserved result of a long time working hard of all the people in charge. We had planned and prepared every steps very carefully before this event took place, from the venue selection, participants and the order of activities as well. Fortunately, there was nothing happened out of my plan.

Additionally, organizing other events like annual inter-departmental sports and annual corporate picnics also belongs to my major. Hence, I will certainly not be afraid to be delegated to conduct such duties like this.

It is my big honor when working in such a good environemnt like our company. Once again, I sincerely thank you for the compliments from you and our company CEO given to our annual conference. This sucess will be an enormous motivation in my career. In the future, I will try to complete all of my work in best ways.

Yours sincerely,
Jeremy

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Andy Moore,

First of all, I am really thankful to you for your letter full of the honest compliments that you gave me ý này đã được thể hiện rõ ở từ your rồi. It was my great pleasure and responsibility when having a chance to devote myself to our company. I am very happy to know that our annual executive conference held last week was sucessful chính tả beyond expectations. This was considered as a wonderful achievement of my team.

In fact, the idea taking the name “Stronger as a team” came to me quite accidentally while I was watching a reality gameshow on TV. I think that it really fits the current situation happening in our company. Despite of không dùng giới từ khi dùng despite any difficulties and barriers, all of bạn đang dùng all với nghĩa việc cần làm nên không dùng of we need to do is uniting to jointly promote its development as far as possible. That is not only the meaning of our theme but also the message I would like to widely spread among everyone working in our branch.

Furthermore, it can not (bạn đang dùng nghia không thể phủ nhận) be denied that this outstanding conference is the deserved result of a long time working hard dùng cụm danh từ) of all the people in charge our team (cụ thể nhóm của bạn). We had planned and prepared every steps very carefully before this event took place,( from including (để liệt kê) the venue selection, participants and the order of activities as well) để sau every steps để giải thích cho danh từ đó. Fortunately, there was nothing happened đã có động từ rồi out of my plan.

Additionally, organizing other events like annual inter-departmental sports and annual corporate picnics also belongs to dùng động từ tobe my major. Hence, I will certainly not be afraid to be delegated to conduct such duties like this.

It is my big honor when working in such a good environemnt like our company. Once again, I sincerely thank you for the compliments from you and our company CEO given to our annual conference để sau danh từ compliments. This sucess chính tả will be an enormous motivation in my career. In the future, I will try to complete all of my work in best ways.

Yours sincerely,
Jeremy

 

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