Time : 2020-07-05 11:51:53
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Mr. Donovan,
It's my honor to have received a letter from a resident, especially when not many people would take concerns about their privilege. Thank you for speaking up about our mistakes and imperfections regarding the quality of your lifestyle. We always want to bring you the best living experience.
Of the issue that you've mentioned, I utterly understand and am sincerely apologetic for it. Our laundry service has just been brought to operation recently, so we cannot guarantee the best facilities. The number of laundry baskets used to be sufficient for everybody, but I guess that it could not live up to people's demands. I appreciate that you have recommended a solution, and I will certainly follow it.
In addition, I will go over the communal laundry once or twice a month to make sure my residents always live comfortably. Also, more dryers will be put into consideration if necessary.
I hope this response is contenting to you. As of this moment, that is all I can to help improve your living quality, but I wish it would be enough.

With best regards,
Mr. Watson.

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Mr. Donovan,
It's không viết tắt trong thư formal my honor to have received a letter from a resident, especially when not many people would take concerns about their privilege nhận xét này không phù hợp . Thank you for speaking up about our mistakes telling us about the problem with washing room and imperfections regarding the quality of your lifestyle. We always want to bring you the best living experience.
Of the issue that you've mentioned, I utterly understand and am sincerely apologetic for it không tương quan cấu trúc khi dùng [removed] vừa dùng động từ thường, vừa dùng động từ tobe) . Our laundry service has just been brought to operation recently, so we cannot guarantee the best facilities. The number of laundry baskets used to be sufficient for everybody, but I guess that it could not live up to people's demands nên tìm hiểu thực trạng vấn đề: có hay không. nên có ý dẫn đến hướng giải quyết I appreciate that you have recommended a solution, and I will certainly follow it.
In addition, I will go over the communal laundry once or twice a month to make sure my residents always live comfortably. Also, more dryers will be put into consideration if necessary.
I hope this response is contenting to you. As of this moment, that is all I can thiếu động từ to help improve your living quality, but I wish it would be enough.

With best regards,
Mr. Watson.

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Điểm: 4.5