Time : 2020-07-07 17:04:49
Điểm: 8/10
Dear Lance Donovan,

I know you very well as a loyal customer who have been a resident of my Sky Village Apartment Complex for almost 5 years. Hope this email finds you well. And once again, thank you for choosing and accompanying us throughout the years. Moreover, I also sincerely apologize to you for some of significant inconveniences that you experienced during the time staying in my building.

In reality, I was quite shocked when hearing my customers had to wait for a very long time to use the communal washers and dryers. Also, it is horrible that the people who come before do not empty the washing machines and dryers on time after using them. To be honest, I am really sympathetic with the troubles you suffered when insufficient living conditions in my building have interfered and wasted your time as well.

As you suggested, I would put more laundry buckets in our communal room so that all of the residents including you will take more advantage of doing their laundries. Besides that, I will also request everyone to be more conscious of using communal properties in the building. I believe that these measures will thoroughly solve the problems you encountered.

Thank you for informing me about this problem. Hope that everything related to this will soon return to the normal orbit in order that all of the residents could gain best when staying in our high-end Apartment Complex.

Please do not hesitate to contact via my email if you have any further problems.

Yours sincerely,
Mr Watson

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Lance Donovan,

I know you very well as a loyal customer who have been a resident of my Sky Village Apartment Complex for almost 5 years. Hope this email finds dùng tương lai đơn you well. And once again, thank you for choosing and accompanying us throughout the years. Moreover, I also sincerely apologize to you for some of significant inconveniences that you experienced during the time staying in my building.

In reality, I was quite shocked when hearing my customers had to wait for a very long time to use the communal washers and dryers. Also, it is horrible that the people who come before do not empty the washing machines and dryers on time after using them. To be honest, I am really sympathetic with the troubles you suffered when insufficient living conditions in my building have interfered and wasted your time as well.

As you suggested, I would put more laundry buckets in our communal room so that all of the residents including you will take more advantage of doing their laundries. Besides that, I will also request everyone to be more conscious of using communal properties in the building. I believe that these measures will thoroughly solve the problems danh từ số ít you encountered.

Thank you for informing me about this problem ý này nên để ở đầu đoạn 2, sau đó bạn nên tìm hiểu thực trạng của vấn đề. Hope that everything related to this will soon return to the normal orbit in order that all of the residents could gain best when staying in our high-end Apartment Complex.

Please do not hesitate to contact via my email if you have any further problems.

Yours sincerely,
Mr Watson

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