Time : 2020-07-07 23:13:45
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Mr. Lance Donovan,

Thanks for writing to me and letting me know about the shortcomings in the Sky Village Apartment where you have lived for 5 years. Besides, I am so sorry about some deficiencies of our building. Thank you for offering suggestions so that we can improve and better serve the resident who is living in this building.

In fact, I understand the difficulties when you have to wait to use the washing machine and dryer in the common laundry room without a laundry basket to get clothes out of the washing machines. However, I would like to tell you that due to a lack of awareness of some people, although our names were engraved on the laundry buckets, the laundry buckets were still lost. Thus, it is very difficult for us to buy 10 extra laundry buckets as your request, because there are some people, they took our laundry buckets by mistake. In other words, they often forget to return the laundry buckets to us after they finished using them. Therefore, I think you should buy a laundry basket yourself when I am not able to meet your requirements.

Regarding some people who do not bother taking their clothes out of the washing machines on time after the laundries are done, we will send a notice to each household and remind them to take out their clothes to make sure that other people have an empty machines to use.

Finally, I am sorry for not meeting your wishes. However, I am very thankful for your sincere suggestions. If there are other deficiencies, do not hesitate to inform me. That will help us very much in improving our services.

Kind regards,
Mr Watson
The building manager

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Mr. Lance Donovan,

Thanks for writing to me and letting me know about the shortcomings in the Sky Village Apartment where you have lived for 5 years. Besides, I am so sorry about some deficiencies of our building. Thank you for offering suggestions so that we can improve and better serve the residents danh từ số nhiều và chia động từ theo danh từ đó who is living in this building.

In fact, I understand the difficulties when you have to wait to use the washing machines and dryers in the common communal  laundry room without a laundry basket to get clothes out of the washing machines. However, I would like to tell you that due to a lack of awareness of some people, although our names were engraved on the laundry buckets không cần thiết, the laundry buckets were still lost. Thus, it is very difficult for us to buy 10 extra laundry buckets as your request, because there are some people, they took our laundry buckets by mistake. In other words, they often forget to return the laundry buckets to us after they finished using them. Therefore, I think you should buy a laundry basket yourself when I am not able to meet your requirements.

Regarding some people who do not bother taking their clothes out of the washing machines on time after the laundries are done, we will send a notice to each household and remind them to take out their clothes to make sure that other people have an empty machines to use.

Finally, I am sorry for not meeting your wishes. However, I am very thankful for your sincere suggestions. If there are other deficiencies, do not hesitate to inform me. That will help us very much in improving our services.

Kind regards,
Mr Watson
The building manager

 

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Điểm: 8