Time : 2020-06-23 21:49:16
Điểm: 5/10
Dear Adam,
It pleases me to hear that you enjoyed my book, and even spent your time writing such a lovely response letter. I hope it is and will be your delight of the day.
To be honest, I had considerable hardships at the start of the novel. I didn't know what to write about or who. However, there was this spectacular reality trip that Lana introduced to me just a week before I started working on the novel. I'd learned a lot through it: partnership, solidarity, resilience, and diligence. I find the course very helpful and meaningful. Thus, if you and your daughter have any spare time, do think over signing up for it. I will send you the website later on.
About my novel, I am glad to see someone has scrutinized it as clearly as you did. You're a great literary critic whom I have always looked up to. Once again, it's my honor to have you as a reader, and it's a sight for sore eyes to read your compliments on my work.
Thank you for your care and love! I look forward to hearing more from you.

With best regards,
Charles.

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Dear Adam,
It pleases me dùng cấu trúc I am pleased to hear that you enjoyed my book, and even spent your time writing such a lovely response letter. I hope it is and will be chỉ dùng 1 thì thôi your delight of the day.
To be honest, I had considerable hardships at the start of the novel. I didn't know what to write about or who was involved. However, there was this a spectacular reality trip that Lana introduced to me just a week before I started working on the novel. I'd learned a lot through it: partnership, solidarity, resilience, and diligence. I find the course very helpful and meaningful. Thus, if you and your daughter have any spare time, do think over signing up for it. I will send you the website later on.lan man, nên tập trungg vào ý tưởng viết sách của bạn
About my novel, I am glad to see someone has scrutinized it as clearly as you did. You're a great literary critic whom I have always looked up to lan man. Once again, it's my honor to have you as a reader, and it's a sight for sore eyes to read your compliments on my work.
Thank you for your care and love! I look forward to hearing more from you.

With best regards,

Charles.

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