Time : 2020-06-23 21:46:23
Điểm: 6/10
Dear Adam Fuller,

I am very glad to receive your letter. Thanks for sharing my happiness. In fact, I am very happy when the book was first published to readers. In other words, this is the first time the book is published so I cannot avoid ann eager feeling and I was really overjoyed.

To be honest, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read the book which I sent you. Besides, you gave a positive review about my first works. Indeed, thanks to your compliments, I have more motivation to write more good works.

Once again, thank you so much for your congratulation. At the end of this week, I will hold a small party to invite some our relatives and friends. Thus, I would like to invite you to come to my house to share the happiness with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,
Charles

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Adam Fuller,

I am very glad to receive your letter. Thanks for sharing my happiness. In fact, I am very happy when the my book was first published to readers. In other words, this is the first time the book is published so I cannot avoid ann eager feeling and I was really overjoyed.ý này bạn diễn đạt khá khó hiểu, bạn chỉ cần thể hiện ở từ happy ở ý trước là được rồi

To be honest, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read the book which I sent you. Besides, you gave a positive review about my first works. Indeed, thanks to your compliments, I have more motivation to write more good works.

Once again, thank you so much for your congratulation. At the end of this week, I will hold a small party to invite some our relatives and friends. Thus, I would like to invite you to come to my house to share the happiness with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. ý tưởng hay

Yours,
Charles

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Điểm: 6.5