Time : 2020-06-23 23:36:52
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Adam Fuller,

I am very happy when reading your letter. Besides, I thank you for your warm wishes you sent. Your congratulations wishes warmed my heart and made me so happy. Thank you very much for your encouragement.

Actually, I myself cannot believe that my book was published in such a short time. I am really excited and I would like to share my happiness to you. Furthermore, I knew that when you were a student, you were very good at literature and you always had very good comments so I wanted to send the book to you so that you could give a more objective view of my first works.

Honestly, thank you so much for giving me a lot of compliments for my first works. Indeed, your congratulation is the best motivation for me to write good works for book lovers andyou.

Once again, thank you so much for your wishes and compliments. By the way, I would like to invite you to the party which will be held at my house on this Sunday to share this happy moment and I will be filled with more joy if you would come. Write me soon and tell me all your news, and wish you enjoyable days!

Best,
Charles

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Adam Fuller,

I am very happy when reading your letter. Besides, I thank you for your warm wishes you sent. Your congratulations and wishes warmed my heart and made me so happy. Thank you very much for your encouragement.

Actually, I myself cannot believe that my book was published in such a short time. I am really excited and I would like to share my happiness to you. Furthermore, I knew that when you were a student, you were very good at literature and you always had very good comments, so I wanted to send the book to you so that you could give a không nên dùng a khi dùng more more objective views of my first works.

Honestly, thank you so much for giving me a lot of compliments for my first works. Indeed, your congratulation is the best motivation for me to write good works for book lovers andyou.

Once again, thank you so much for your wishes and compliments. By the way, I would like to invite you to the party which will be held at my house on this Sunday to share this happy moment and I will be filled with more joy if you would come. Write me soon and tell me all your news, and wish you enjoyable days!

Best,
Charles

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