Time : 2020-05-26 09:12:19
Điểm: 4/10
Dear Alex Dalton,

I have just received your email and I totally understand your desire.

Firstly, as far as I am concerned, the courses you joined in are going to start on May 30th. It means that it is about 4 days to run. Therefore, I am so sorry to say that it is impossible for us to give you full reimbursement due to your late request. After taking much into consideration, we will give you the refund which is the half of your handed tuition fee.
To be honest, all the names of two mention courses had already arranged into classes so that we can guarantee all of them to go well.
That you want to withdraw from these courses may definitely cause certain chaos in our planned classes since we had booked the materials and digital for all students including you, and we cannot change that. We have managed to keep in touch with the distributors; however, they refuse to alter as they have made it.

Luckily, we are about to open more classes with the same subject in the next wintertime. Therefore, you are able to roll in this time as you mentioned.

If you have more questions, you can call my assistant and arrange to meet me.

Yours sincerely,
Mr. Martin








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Dear Alex Dalton,

I have just received your email and I totally understand your desire.

Firstly, as far as I am concerned, the courses you joined in are going to start on May 30th. It means that it is about 4 days to run. Therefore, I am so sorry to say that it is impossible for us to give you full reimbursement due to your late request. After taking much into consideration, we will give you the refund which is the half of your handed tuition fee.
To be honest, all the names of two mentioned (dùng quá khứ phân từ bị động trước danh từ) courses tên của học sinh, sinh viên chứ không phải khóa học had already arranged into classes so that we can guarantee all of them to go well.
That you want to withdraw from these courses may definitely cause certain chaos in our planned classes since we had booked the materials and digital for all students including you, and we cannot change that. We have managed to keep in touch with the distributors; however, they refuse to alter as they have made it. bạn đưa ra hàng hoạt các lý do này với mục đích phản hồi là gì? đây chính là nguyên nhân bạn không thể hoàn lại học phí và không muốn anh ấy rút khỏi khóa học, vậy sự chuyển ý với ý trên đâu?

Luckily, we are about to open more classes with the same subject in the next wintertime. Therefore, you are able to roll in this time as you mentioned.

If you have more questions, you can call my assistant and arrange to meet me.

Yours sincerely,
Mr. Martin

Bạn từ chối hoàn lại học phí vì có nguyên nhân, song cách viết của bạn để giải thích nguyên nhân thì chưa hợp lý. Bạn có thể khẳng định không thể hoàn lại vì các nguyên nhân sau, và cần có sự nối ý nhé.