Time : 2020-05-26 22:37:29
Điểm: 7/10
Dear Mr. Alex Dalton,

First of all, I would like to thank you for writing us to inform that you request us to refund the tuition fee of the 2 courses which you paid. Actually, I appreciate your sharing about the pressure of your learning and part-time job with us. I fully sympathize with you. I can understand how much pressure makes it impossible for you to manage six courses in the semester. Finally you make the decision to withdraw your tuition fee. Therefore, as the university registrar, I will solve your problem as follows.

In fact, we only refund the full amount when our course is canceled or not enough students. However, if you are under pressure to study, we will solve it another way. Hence, the first thing you should do is you should come your faculty, our Student Support Officer will help you to complete the necessary paperwork and advise you of anything else you might need to do before receiving money. You will have to fill out an application form available at our Faculty Student Support Officer. After that, you send it back to us. I only accept the application for the tuition refund application form upon your signature, simultaneously, I will review and notify you whether you can receive the full refund or not. And it will take 4 weeks for your application to be processed.

To be honest, I would like to have pieces of advice for you. You should have adjustments in your schedule in order to study more systematically. I know that part -time job is very necessary to you, but it is not all. Health is still the most important thing. Thus, you should have the holiday for yourself. When you relax your mind, you will acquire the lesson faster, then learning will become more interesting and you will not be pressured to study anymore

That is what I can do for you as the university registrar. If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to contact with me. I am available at the moment and will reply you as soon as possible.

Kind regards,
Mr. Martin

Nhận xét của giáo viên :

Dear Mr. Alex Dalton,

First of all, I would like to thank you for writing to us (cám ơn đối với thư này là chưa phù hợp) I am surprised when receiving your letter which informs (chú ý chia động từ ở mệnh đề quan hệ) that you request us to refund the tuition fee of the 2 courses which you paid. Actually, I highly appreciate your sharing about the pressure of your learning and part-time job with us. I fully sympathize with you. I can understand how much (việc áp lực khiến bạn không thể quản lý khóa học chứ không phải bao nhiêu) pressure makes it impossible for you to manage six courses in the semester. Finally you make the decision to withdraw your tuition fee. Therefore, as the university registrar, I will solve your problem as follows.

In fact, we only refund the full amount when our course is canceled or not enough because of lack of (nên dùng nguyên nhân cuar việc hủy) students. However, if you are under pressure to study, we will solve it in (trạng ngữ chỉ cách thức) another way. Hence, the first thing you should do is that (dùng mệnh đề danh ngữ sau that) you should come to your faculty, and our Student Support Officer will help you to complete the necessary paperwork and advise you of anything else you might need to do before receiving (diễn đạt lại để rối ý) to receive money. You will have to fill out an application form available at our Faculty Student Support Officer. After that, you send it back to us. I only accept the application for the tuition refund application form upon your signature, simultaneously, I will review and notify you whether you can receive the full refund or not. And it will take 4 weeks for your application to be processed.

To be honest, I would like to have pieces of advice for you. You should have adjustments in your schedule in order to study more systematically. I know that part -time job is very necessary to you, but it is not all. Health is still the most important thing. Thus, you should have the holiday for yourself. When you relax your mind, you will acquire the lesson faster, then learning will become more interesting and you will not be pressured to study anymore nên viết ý việc học quan trọng hơn việc làm thêm, việc khuyên bảo đảm bảo sức khỏe không phù hợp với cương vị là

That is what I can do for you as the university registrar. If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to contact with me. I am available at the moment and will reply you as soon as possible.

Kind regards,
Mr. Martin

 

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