Time : 2021-01-23 11:20:50
Điểm: 4/10
The younger people today often listen to or play modern music like hip-hop, pop, rock,... that can make them dance, chill, fun,...so they almost forget about a genre of music, which is the very start of today's music-classical music. Classical music is a beautiful genre of music. It's often played by piano,cello, guitar, trumpet, violin,... When these instruments work together, they create comfortable, relaxing and soft sounds that touch human's heart. Not only that, classical music is also poetic. A classical band have a conductor, musicians and singers. Classical music was very popular in the 18th and 19th centuries in Europe with many legends of music such as: Mozart, Beethoven,..and immortal songs like: Swan Lake, Symphony No.9 of Beethoven,...The doctors usually give the pregnant women some classical CDs because it helps the child's brain develop.But now, classical music is very underrated and only old people listen to them, as everyone thinks classical music is boring and obsolete, so classical music doesn't attract them anymore. But the world needs to have this beautiful and pure genre of music. We should encourage people, especially the young who interested in classical music to play or perform this genre of music to preserve it.

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The younger people today often listen to or play modern music like hip-hop, pop, rock,... that can make them dance, chill, fun,không tương quan từ loại khi dùng and...so they almost dislike forget about a genre of music, which is the very start of today's music-classical music. Classical music is a beautiful genre of music. It's often played by piano,cello, guitar, trumpet, violin,... When these instruments work together, they create comfortable, relaxing and soft sounds that touch human's heart. Not only that, classical music is also poetic. A classical band have a conductor, musicians and singers. Classical music was very popular in the 18th and 19th centuries in Europe with many legends of music such as: Mozart, Beethoven,..and immortal songs like: Swan Lake, Symphony No.9 of Beethoven,...The doctors usually give the pregnant women some classical CDs because it helps the child's brain develop.But now, classical music is very underrated and only old people listen to them, as everyone thinks classical music is boring and obsolete, so classical music doesn't attract them anymore. But the world needs to have this beautiful and pure genre of music. We should encourage people, especially the young who interested in classical music to play or perform this genre of music to preserve it.

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