Time : 2021-01-23 22:19:36
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Classical music is supposed as academic music then it is very picky to the listeners. To perceive this music, the listeners need to concentrate great with comfortable spirit for the length of time beside they should have some knowledge about music then fewer and fewer young people to choose this.
Classical music always brings formal and noble feeling because of its grandeur. Enjoying the orchestra with performance of talent instrumentalists, classical music will lead the listeners to wonderful world through famous masterpieces written by talent composers such as Mozart, Beethoven…persons no body does not know who they were but not many people love listening and playing their music. Firstly, living in the modern but fierce competition, most young people have not got enough peace and quite time to enjoy classical music as their thought seems to be covered by working and studying. Secondly, classical music needs the listeners to have knowledge about music and musical instruments and these expensive tools are one of main reasons to prevent people from studying and playing classical music. And not many orchestra program are organized in publish because of less audiences and expenses tickets.
Some people believe that listening to classical music will improve memories for the elderly and impulse the development of fetus then pregnant women are encouraged to listen and play this type of music. Besides that, classical music need to be preserved and maintained like precious thing of human and this music also make people become calmer to deal with problems then that are the reasons the young people need to be encouraged to play and listen to classical music.
In conclusion, classical music always brings elegant and noble feeling for listeners however this musical instruments are quite expenses and it is not easy to organize the orchestra in public as the best way to attract young people.

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Classical music is supposed as academic music then it is very picky to the listeners. To perceive this music, the listeners need to concentrate great fully with comfortable spirit for the length of time beside they should have some knowledge about music then fewer and fewer young people to choose động từ chính của mệnh đề this.
Classical music always brings formal and noble feeling because of its grandeur. Enjoying the orchestra with performance of talent instrumentalists, classical music will lead the listeners to wonderful world through famous masterpieces written by talent composers such as Mozart, Beethoven…persons no body đâu là chủ ngữ? does not know who they were thông tin này là không đúng but not many people love listening and playing their music. Firstly, living in the modern but fierce competition ? dùng từ không hợp lý, có thể dùng living in the modern society, most young people have not got enough peace and quite time to enjoy classical music as their thought seems to be covered by working and studying. Secondly, classical music needs requires the listeners to have knowledge about music and musical instruments and these expensive tools which (dùng mệnh đề quan hệ thay vì mệnh đề độc lập với and) are one of main reasons to prevent people from studying and playing classical music. And not many fewer orchestra programs danh từ số nhiều sau many are organized in publish dùng từ sai nghĩa because of less audiences and expenses tickets.
Some people believe that listening to classical music will improve memories for the elderly and impulse the development of fetus, so then pregnant women are encouraged to listen and play this type of music. Besides that, classical music need sto be preserved and maintained like precious thing of human and this kind of music also makes chia động từ theo chủ ngữ ngôi thứ ba số ít people become calmer to deal with problems. tách câu then that Those (dùng với động từ số nhiều) are the reasons the young people need to be encouraged to play and listen to classical music.
In conclusion, classical music always brings elegant and noble feeling for listeners; however, dấu câu khi dùng however  this không dùng this với danh từ số nhiều musical instruments are quite expenses tính từ sau tobe and it is not easy to organize the orchestra in public as the best way to attract young people.

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